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Hey, good demo of your song Douglas -- good mix and vox -- say, do you have to begin so many of your songs with a drumbeat measure as an intro?--just a thought~~Allan.

Hey, good sound on this -- catchy feel to it -- I like that bass and the growl on the vox -- good one~~Allan.

Very dramatic -- good mix -- perfect for a soundtrack -- wishing you good traction on this~~Allan.

Much thanks.

xxx.

Paul, thanks much for listening and commenting -- glad ya like those lyrics~~Allan.

Thanks Nigel -- yeah, those Byrds were great but "good thing" was the Raiders--?~~Allan.

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I'm pleased that you like it and I thank you for commenting.

uh...excuse me...uh...yeah, I just wanna get there to the top of the heap...mind if I get by?...damn, did I step on you?...hmm, sorry, you okay?..almost there...thanks...whoa, the view looks sooooooooo different from here..look out below!

Hey, good demo of your song -- vox up front and lyrics are understandable -- I ask -- what more can you ask of a demo?~~Allan.

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Hey Bill, I listened to the excerpts on your site -- an ambitious project -- it sounds good and I wish you the best with it~Allan.

Cool demo Douglas though a bit hot sometimes.

lo-fi/hi-fi/no-fi/why-fi? (I think we just collaborated but I'm not sure...)

Thank you for your nice comment.~~Allan.

ACOS

Hey Rex, this is a very good demo of your song -- your vocals are expressive and pleasing -- the arrangement is also very good -- the mix is perfect (except the drums might come up a tad). My only nit is the lyrics -- they fit the song as is but are somewhat predictable. You are consistently good at what you do~~Allan.

Indeed.

Very well done indeed. This is perhaps the best -- in terms of the recording -- piece I've heard on this forum in quite a bit. The arrangement is interesting, melodic and very well played -- the mix is terrific -- the guitar playing is solid and and the tones are tasty -- the drummer is quite good. My only nit is that this would have more impact and musicality with a solid bass player doing some interesting lines. Good luck with your album. (This should have had a lot of replies on this forum, but...)~~Allan

Sounds great -- mix is good but bass could have more volume -- oh, wait...

there's more here than meets the ear...or is there?

som

Thanks for listening Doug.

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