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Hey man, love that guitar tone (are you a Rory Gallagher fan?) -- very nicely played -- the overall mix and sound is very good -- spot-on vox -- thanks for making my toes tap~~Allan

Hey Paul -- you've got a terrific voice -- I like your phrasing and the sound of your voice. The arrangement got better as the song progressed -- like that tag a lot. This is a very good demo of a very good pop song -- nice work!~~Allan

I'd like to hear your song -- do you have a link instead of a download?

Very nice demo of your song -- mix and arrangement are top notch -- I hear a touch of Waylon in your voice which is very appealing -- good work~~Allan

Hey Douglas, wow those drums are crackin' in that intro - reverb sounds great -- but then during the song they lose some of the punch. To me, it sounds like the heavy use of reverb throughout the mix is making the overall sound a bit mushy. I like your sneering vox and the chord changes from verse to chorus. Oh, that rhyme of "annoyed" and "toy" -- good one.~~Allan

Hey Paul, this is a nice song -- catchy -- and a good demo of it but this ain't no dance song -- :)~~Allan

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Hey Rex, another terrific demo from you - the mix is very good -- I like your acoustic guitar playing: the rhythm is slightly unusual -- and, your vocal is spot-on: a warm resonate sound coupled with good phrasing. Good work~~Allan

Hey Douglas -- this is a good demo of your song -- vocal is riding the mix just right -- maybe drums could go up a tad tho--nice work~~Allan

Hey Rex, this is a terrific demo of your song -- vocal is very good as is the mix -- cool title too :) I enjoyed this. ~~Allan

Very nice listen -- good arrangement -- thanks for sharing.~~Allan

Hey Freddy -- this is another cool number -- I like those guitars cos they sound swampy -- and bless your heart for not rhyming Sally with Alley :) ~~Allan

Yeah, and they last a long time -- I've had mine for years and it gets a lot of use -- and oh yeah, I use the mic a lot too~~Allan.

Hey, I'm glad you like the song -- thanks for listening & commenting~~Allan.

Why thanks Freddy -- I'm pleased that you like it~~Allan.

Yeah, Squeeze were/are a great band aren't they? -- some wonderful songs. And Tilbrook is such an underrated guitar player -- fluid and melodic.

Hi John, thanks for the tip -- I'm pleased you listened a few times and that you like the song--much appreciated mate~~Allan.

Hey Gary, can't say I hear that but I'll take the compliment :) I'm not a huge fan of The Stranglers songwriting and I'm not overly familiar with them but I've heard a bunch of their music that I've liked -- esp. JJ's roaring bass and those proggy keys~~Allan.

Hi Douglas, that's my one and only mic -- the sm57. Glad ya like the song -- thanks~~Allan.

Hey Paul, thanks for listening & commenting mate--glad ya like the song~~Allan.

Hey, thank you for listening and commenting -- I'm glad ya like it~~Allan.

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Terrific demo of your song -- the mix is clear and the vocals are sweet~~Allan.

A little too upbeat lyrically for me but hey, that's just me -- this was wonderfully done (I like that line about breaking branches -- clever)~~Allan.

This is a very pleasant listen with some surprising changes -- and the mix is very good~~Allan.