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This is great! The vocals drown a little bit in the arrangement, i would personally prefer it louder. The instrument that comes in after the chorus is a bit loud and a little bit sour at times. Other than that, it's great!

A lovely tune with nice little melodies Bjorn. Sounds like it would fit quite nice to some nature shots in Scotland. I find it a little bit dry in the mix, a little bit more reverb and stereo width would probably be good.

Nice little melodies, experimental and a bit weird. I like it!

Thank you very much for your kinds words! No fx other than Waves Cla Vocals on the vocals. Yes, it's already out but i welcome all feedback for future songs.

Thank you very much Bjorn for listening and your kind words! Yeah, thats pretty much my songwriting in a nutshell. I very seldom reveal the main plot i plain words. It's always up to the listener. Personally, i find that kind of songwriting more interesting.

Great song and nice arrangement. The vocals are great but could be mixed a little bit more "in your face" in my book.

Agree with James on the hi-hat, other than that it sounds great. Bring on the vocals!

Thank you very much Douglas! Nice to get a comment on the ending as well.

Great track James!

Another great one! Good strong lyrics, they really kept me interested the whole song!

Wow, this was great. The arrangement has a nice Depeche Mode feel to it. Enjoyed it alot! And btw, my real name is John.

Very nice indeed. Your voices work very well together. Good work!

Thank you very much InstrEd & SPAK, appreciate it alot!

Thank you very much Tom for listening, your kind words and good solid feedback.

Thank you very much James!

Thank you very much David!

Hope you like it! Mary Has a Plan for Tonight I tried to embed but had no luck! Lyrics: