SUPAREELS

Well up to your high standard Bjorn, only nit that I thought the Sitar was just a bit to high in the mix but it's a very small nit. ATB Steve

Your work is so well produced it's hard to imagine a better sound. I hear a bit of Simon Le Bon and war of the worlds in this mix .. just so good ... Thanks for your posts m8 .. just love em! Steve

Lynn ! For the first time EVER! No Crits .. V2 is a great listen so from me to you ? ... well maybe the ending left me wanting but how do you finish apart from that? All these years of mucking around and you produce a gem ... must go ... ghodda listen again ? ATB Steve

Good for a demo idea but the mix is severely lacking making the whole song toppy. Good to see lyrics but your vocal is, in some, places is very low. One last thing is that it's a happy tune with a sad message ...perhaps you meant to do it that way, who knows but you. I would suggest a remix with the comments here in mind

Just a thing ... 'cause it's my way .. Don't think your voice needs any process ...been going through your work and 'Side Effect of Technology' says it all ... well a bit anyway ....I think I am becoming a fan ... so don't let me down on the lyrics LOL ? Stay well Steve SupaReels Music

Yep, it's the same deal from my end Bjorn, it's just that from then to now your stuff ( and vids ) have become so professional ( respect ) I wondered if you was gonna take the hop ? For me ( with the home built PC ( as you ) I think I needed reassurance. Good to know you get great stuff from your gear. I had the opportunity to look up an old mate and he had the latest Mac book set up / when he told me how long it took to swap things around with the flaf ( Samples etc ) Not the main progs, I don't think I'm young enough to learn a new O/S ... plus I wanna sleep ?.. I use C/w by Bandlab and C/b 12 pro , and IMHO they are the best ... for everything a songwriter needs. Thanks mate for responding ?means a lot Stay well Steve

Left comment on SC Great song .. a real laugh .. must be my warped SOH ? .... ATB Steve

Right! I listened (a couple of turns maybe more ? ) I am a reader of words and I love (if that's right, given the sadness and seemingly hopeless message ) what you have put down in your music, for me, it seems unfinished, and I also feel that I can't offer a crit to help ... just that something is missing .. certainly not the verse, but in the whole piece somehow.. maybe the high hat could come down a bit and bass drum up, to carry the tune through , the continuous drone of the pad is great ( John Lennon's 'I'm only dreaming ' comes to mind) .. for me you have a real feel for the message and skipped your skill as a musician, in some way. Never the less it is a great piece and worthy of a little more time ..instrumentally ... plus! "where's the lyrics!"? LOL All the best Steve

Yep! been there ... Are you using MAC? or staying with windows ... Just idle interest as I was thinking of moving over to Mac ... but the work eerrg Steve

Hi Bjorn, I also get a bit of G/G in this piece, but it brings to mind 'The good the bad and the ugly' sound track ...dunno why ... However your getting really good at musical communication , where one sound counters another .. and so on. I really am a fan of your work ... but where's the vid? LOL ATB Steve

Thanks for the words Lynn ... food for thought me thinks ....

This one is a step to far for me Jess ... ATB Steve

Love the song, been there ... love the place ./..... Hate the competition, it's like a remix night .. I entered anyway .. it's the challenge LOL ATB Steve

Glad you didn't take offense ... when I listened i thought ..nop! .... the usual stuff is better than this ... move to scotch, TMO, LOL ,,,,, Oh and I have 2 pairs of MDR 750 and I agree .. their sometimes better than the DT770 in some ways ... snake oil .. the lot .... what works,works ! ATB Steve

Defo IMO should have had a punchy bass drum and slowed down to a street beat ... Mothers of invention would have done this back in the day with ' If I were your father .. I'd have >?>>.) Bit lazy coming from you ... but don't wanna offend and none intended .. you got soo much talent ... SupaReels

Hello m8, Well this is bloody good ... I waited to the end to find the kitchen sink ... everything else sounds like it's been thrown in ... but you know I love to read the words, but you tease ... you tease, bad boy ... I love your stuff and don't comment enough ( although my best friend and wife has been jumping from stone to stone with different health probs .. last one being a heart attack ... but she reads and I write and review so we get by .. my last 'client' being my grandson! LOL ) Give me words man ! .... Oh and BTW this one is IMO a great one ( Needs a little L&A) but a great start ... Stay well my friend and keep up the great work ! Steve

As said, I think we all feel the world is a very hard place at the moment and your message resonates with me. I know when you can't sing a song you've written how you want to can be extremely frustrating. This is a well written song in my view and so thanks for the post. Just something to hold in mind is that there are times when writing you try too hard to sing the message you want to convey ... in any case this is a great bit of work. ATB Steve

Sorry guys but this is not my work ...I have flagged it up so the right person get the credit or advice Steve Poole (supareels music)

Many thanks Lynn for your detailed listening and as always good advice. My intention is to do a complete revamp .. but as it as so long I need the time to make it worthwhile, watch this space LOL Take care Steve

I know when we were in conversation some time ago while PM'ing, you made clear that even then you were having difficulties. I feel for you, as this must have been hard ... very hard, but my hope is that here you have a soft place to land and understood, pouring that into your music. I along with the others here wish you strength for the coming months and years ahead. Steve

Wonderful writing and production (to say nothing of the vid). One of my all time favorite go to is Peter Gabriel , and this reminds me of his work ... Just excellent and thanks for posting it ? Steve

There's so much work in this one... excellent story/lyrics very impressive my friend ... I also really enjoyed the trip ? ATB Steve

Not too sure about that where I'm concerned ? But just to say I've been trying out that god particle plug .. and it's great for finishing/mastering work ...amazing bit'o'kit .. might invest a few bob ?

Been doing my homework and, cutting a long one, I think the master track has that pro feel that we have come to accept, as said it's a refresher to hear another language and it's a sweet song mixed well .. boy have you come a long way mate ... love it ! ATB and happy new year Steve

Came late to the party, but I'm glad I caught this one ... great song and I really enjoyed it Steve