more reverb on the horn stabs?
 
	I like the arpeggiations you have chosen - the panned right guitar one might be a bit loud when you are singing.
 
	I dig the guiro!!
 
	 
 
	Vocals sure do work, and the ghostly, poltergeistish bgv's are a very cool, supporting add.
 
	 
 
	It's a memorable and yes quirky song! For me your sung melody is integral to understanding the arrangement of the other voices - which means, for me, the intro section was kind of the low point. When the song starts, I was having a really hard time figuring out what it was doing.If this were my tune A) I'd be quite proud indeed! and B) I'd whack the entire intro right off, and start it with one go 'round of the chorus. Your vocals I think would be a much better early hook. Just my .02 brain cells on that one . . .
 
	 
 
	call it a win, Lynn.
 
	 
 
	cheers,
 
	-Tom