PhonoBrainer

Listened to both, I really like your touch, and better, your choices, particularly on "Rain in Florence" which I guess is the newer one? Great tone on that piano or vsti! cheers, -Tom

Very interesting tune! Vocally, you've got a flanger or microtune on it? Maybe? One danger of that kind of processing is that it can leave things thin. Can you EQ some mids back in? Particularly on the chorus? Do you have a "tape" simulator? A good one of these can add a nice weight to things. Other than that, I like the mix and the instrumental performances. And the vocals are just fine - (were they mic'd with a condenser-type mic?) . . . but it does feel like the vocals are struggling to keep up with the weight of the instruments, which are mixed well. Double-tracking the vocal with a different mic that adds more weight (like a good dynamic mic) might be a help! Interested to see where you take it. cheers, -Tom

Duuuude! Full Joe Walsh mode! Waay fun. Sorry to have you gone so long, glad you are back. I'm still getting used to the Bandlab ecosystem. First up, your song came right out of the gate LOUD cause the Bandlab player was maxxed from the get go. And I suspect your tune had plenty of volume. I really like your vocals, and of course, the lyrics. Fly that flag, bro. I don't know about you, but did you hear the less-than-seamless edits, for example 2:32 - seems like you cut and pasted in a song section and maybe missed the rhythm a little - or was that courtesy of the Bandlab upload process? Hard to tell. I'm sure you'll get on top of it. I would also vote for a vocals-up mix, and I think you have room to decrease volume on that piano. Said a piano player More Lynn songs are always a good thing to my ears. cheers, -Tom

A nice clean recording with a sense of fun. Cool visuals to boot. I dug the hyper-chair aerobics! Must try those. cheers, -Tom

Banal and Pastiche University?

Test reply! Cool groove and vid. Not bad for one day! Had a T. Dolby feel. At once optimistic and creepy! Mix was very clear indeed. -Tom