Paul Bush

Nothing wrong with this great sounding track Rex , monotonous ??? with your super voice you could make a telephone book sound great ..cheers p

Just a very well made song well done fantastic sound ,

Always a treat to hear your projects , super sound, production and vocals , harmonies are just great a really good song

Hi Chaps after taking all you comments on board on my warts and all previous recording, this master could be a perfect lesson on less is more ..however I ignored that and crammed as much as i could into 3 minutes , If you heard the rough draft you `ll know what I´m talking about as always all comments are welcome ...cheers paul ..Oh I do however like the album cover on this rather apt I thought ..

Hi Wookiee , thanks for having a gander young man, I get what you're saying i did in fact have a middle eight but due to the fact I don't really have a proper chorus it got to the rambling on and on stage rather quickly to the point where even i couldn't stand it ,so I went for dumbing it down and keeping it simple , speaking of keeping it simple I´m in the process of adding so much to it that its its .. I just dont know ......I´ll post maybe both together so that we all can make a comparison .......as far as less is more well that fell into the water long ago ..... Ive lost the plot ......again.......cheers paul

Yeah i liked this very much takes me back , lovely vocals very clear production sounds great ..

Always listen to you work , lots of chord changes makes for really interesting hearing , production top backing harmonies just sublime cheers P

Hi M , lovely guitar tone

Hi Nigel cheers , I feel i´m loosing all perspective as far as my songwriting is concerned, so all comments are a huge boost to my flagging moral, on one side I like the retro feel to this one on the other its lacking originality ,So thanks for commenting I´ll plough along with it... but hey sometimes more is too much . aagghh if only I had a producer ..then it would be his fault ..cheers paul

Thanks Jesse, yeah absolutely it needs to be tightened up , (the bass-guitar solo) I´m really at the ``throw anything at it and see if it sticks stage ´´ it just seems to be lacking something , I tried adding some harmonies but they sounded awful , so I´m at a bit of a loss with this one , but that's the fun of the fair , thanks for commenting cheers P

Hi chaps here s another warts and all unfinished project , drums have not been separated so its a pre master mix lots to change , but i feel its just loses momentum halfway through any tips or critique is always welcome cheers Paul https://www.bandlab.com/track/dad4f2f2-ad24-ef11-86d2-6045bd2cd6bc?revId=d9d4f2f2-ad24-ef11-86d2-6045bd2cd6bc See it in the tv, turn over to the other side, Hear it in the radio there´s no where else to hide, Sick of feeling guilty try to hide youre eyes.... …..Desensualised.... …....Oh yes we are.. The hippies in the sixties ban the bomb dont cut your hair, had Lennon (F)-(F6)-(Fmaj7)-(F6) in a bedroom, another socialist millionair, Sick of all this hypocrasy , Lay back in your rocking chair …...Desensualised.... .Oh yes we are.. We were having such a good time , Wheel`s kept a turning round and round... ....oh yes they did..... History repeats itself, just another manmade hell, fall guys get to play their part , and the Generals get another star ... Selling stories on the evening news, Picking the through the bones live on air... Again and agin ... We thought we had a saviour but he sold us down the Nile, The bare faced lies hidden behind a smile , Smoke and mirrors clouded all our eyes. ...…. we`r Mesmerized,........ Oh yes we were Looking at the right hand,while left seals our fate, Backroom deals with a dirty handshake …... now its way to late pushing the hate...... .way too late

Thanks Guys you are all too kind and Kevin cheers that Tele sound is a kit guitar €100,00 , plus €100,00 Tonerider pick ups , I don't know why but its my go- to guitar for the last couple of years or so , I feel i´m running out of steam a bit ...that said I´m working on a new one slowly and its a bit different but definitely 60`s 70`s style its where i feel comfortable once again thanks for your support ..Paul B

Love that guitar sound ,, and the song has a really wired vibe backing vox great main vocal but that guitar sound is really good .cheers P

From the off great main vocal , just super , backing vocals spot on , in my opinion the song could have done with a key change somewhere , but all the same lovely production and a good song...... the sort of song one would hear in a T,V film ..cheers P

I thought this was great , lovely voice but didn't understand one single word , the production was just great , , the singer was to involve in trying to sound to cool .. sorry

Oh yeah loved this that fiddle was fantastic , the whole track had so much depth beautiful acoustic guitars bloody fantastic I had to listen to it three times and still wanted more , great stuff cheers P

Hi Lynn , that change worked well , loved the chord changes , I´think I would like your voice with not so much chorus on it and your harmonies are always spot on I´d like to hear more of them ..cheers P

Oh yes this was just fine loved the riffs and the drums were dam fine , look nothing to report on this piece of work except its bloody great , I could listen to this all day long ..cheers P

Loved the piano , really my type of song that Iike to listen to , great strings , super arrangement , the only glitch for me was the lyrics were just a tick to many words , i suffer from the same problem I start off with too much to say and try and squeeze it all in and then have to dumb it down , its tiresome but it has to be done , still a dam fine song ...cheers P

Nice one, simplicity is the key and so hard to play , you got such a great sound on that guitar just really fine cheers P

Oh yeah loved this, super sounds, vocals just top , guitars really hit the spot cheers P

Listened to it over my Tanoy monitors sounded real fine , put my headphones on ..and wow ! super stuff .... super production , so crisp .. well incredibly done cheers P

Thanks Guys here´s the new mix ...hope you like it ...cheers Paul

Great vocals and harmonies as usual , nice piece of work ,

Hi chaps well this is a pre-mixdown warts and all song about old aged love (myself included being now 67 years old) as always all comments are welcome , cheers paul https://www.bandlab.com/track/789d4683-8e05-ef11-aaf0-000d3aa5105b?revId=779d4683-8e05-ef11-aaf0-000d3aa5105b 1. You came at me like on a southern rain, a tornado and a freight train You looked like you had nothing to loose, worn out make up and Worn out shoes.. You hit the jukebox started dancing to some rythum ` n blues …...... Now that cant lose...... Chorus Yo u—oH Oh-Oh you got nothing else to loose And I -Aye Aye --- I could see it in your eyes Take a seat right next to me, Please dont look at me too deep Ive some scares I´m hiding from, maybe you pull me through the rain 2. You came to me on a summer breeze, just like an infectious disease Sweet and sour and firery hot, she`s got a a few miles on the clock We got the the motion , the pills and potions and its time to rock not gonna stop !... Chorus (G) (Em7) (F) (D) And we`eh weh-weh you got nothing else to loose Take it ea— easy Its the path that we can choose Take a seat right next to me, Please dont look at me too deep We got some scares We`r hiding from, Guide me through this storm and through the rain ….Bridge..... It feels like our time is running out, so many empty hour`s in a day Watching T.V. Shows how to find Mr right, or maybe even fall in love Or buying love potions from medicen man, Who doesn`t give a dam Its better than being alone all alone..... on a make believe or a dating show, ...Solo.... Chorus And we`eh weh-weh you got nothing else to lose Take it ea— easy Its the path that we must choose Take a seat right next to me, Please dont look at me too deep Ive some scares I´m hiding from,Guide me through this storm and rain …...(C)-(G)......