Hi Jack, thanks for the Heads up. I went back to give it a listen and found a few things that I didn't Like in the first and second verse. I think I found it. I gonna repost soon.
Terry
Don't worry about it at all. You're in a taking in information mode right now, not a putting out mode. You will write when you really want to. Read a good book in the meantime.
Regards,
Terry