A commODE TO BANALITY
Dis here's such a glad azz bump
not like that certain sad azz chump
who thrills his mates with bad bazz thumps
on songs that smell like his azz dumps.
Hey Steve, you've got a very good song buried in an opaque mix -- please consider redoing this with a stronger guitar based sound -- your vox are very good -- and there are some interesting melodies but the mix and instrumentation detracts from the song. Man, I'd like to hear a new version of this~~Allan.
Hey Treesha, that's some do-wacka-do synth doodlin' there (which after all seems to be the craze) -- since you say you were "playing around" we'll go with that -- good mix on this one as is~~Allan.
Hey Kevin, terrific demo of your song -- vocals are very nice and the arrangement is interesting -- good mix too -- I enjoyed listening to this~~Allan.
Terrific demo of your song Barry -- your voice is perfect for this style -- like that guitar part too. (Just a comment on the lyrics -- the first verse where you're on the floor and she's on the bed sounds like the dramatic climax of the song -- there's nowhere to go after that in that the other verses are setups to that scenerio -- if that was the last verse lyric it would have more impact.)~~Allan.
Hey Kevin, "Shot in the Back" is terrific --- that groove is infectious and the opening guitar is perfect. Your vox are outstanding -- I like the rock grit in your voice -- the mix is great -- stellar work mate~~Allan.
Freddy, you are a professor of existential blues philosophy for sure -- this mix on this is very good; clear and everything sits well -- another track from you that's a pleasure to hear~~Allan.
Hey Paul, this reminds me of something Steve Miller might do -- good groove and I liked that guitar break -- the playing and tone are perfecto -- good work mate~~Allan.
Well, t you drew no lines but you did reference the song demo... I'm glad you like it -- thanks for listening and commenting -- much appreciated~~Allan.