mark skinner Posted December 3, 2023 Share Posted December 3, 2023 (edited) Hello , here's the Final Remix of a country ballad I wrote with my former bass player "Ebb". Pretty simple song done with my Yairi acoustic , Ibanez bass , and G&L electric. I used MT Power drums and Cakewalk effects. Thanks for the help getting this finished. mark https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14693407 Edited December 11, 2023 by mark skinner Remix 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teegarden Posted December 4, 2023 Share Posted December 4, 2023 Nice song. Separation is good. It sounds a bit thin especially the drums; I do miss some warmth and it could have more bottom part, pronounced bass and base drum. Otherwise, very pleasant to listen to! 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted December 4, 2023 Author Share Posted December 4, 2023 @Teegarden , Thanks .. I'm in the middle of a remix now . There was a boost in the high mids at the mastering stage that may have been excessive. Normally this drum synth sounds good without messing with the EQ hardly any. I'll look closer at it. I'm also settling it down a bit using 1/8 instead of 1/16 patterns. I think it's a little busy for this type of song. I also centered the outro lead guitar , sounds better. I'll post a remix in a day or two. Still in the early stages .. Thanks .. mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted December 4, 2023 Share Posted December 4, 2023 Very nice song. The recording mix sounds really good except the bass is kind of vague sounding to me, kind soft and comes and goes. I think it would be better more defined. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted December 4, 2023 Share Posted December 4, 2023 real fine job.jack c 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockeyjx Posted December 5, 2023 Share Posted December 5, 2023 Agree that there is a general need for more low-end. Good tune though! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted December 5, 2023 Author Share Posted December 5, 2023 Hello , the link now reflects "remix 1". I added a shaker to the chorus sections (still needs some work). I changed the drums up some and reduced their volume. Worked on the bass guitar and did minor reverb changes on the G&L and Vox. Still in the early stages and still needs a little close up editing . Thanks .. mark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted December 5, 2023 Share Posted December 5, 2023 Sounds good here Mark. I am on the Bose cans and they tend to hype the bass. Writing, performance and arrangement all top notch. ?’s t 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted December 6, 2023 Author Share Posted December 6, 2023 (edited) I've done a substantial Remix (2) that the link now reflects. I think it's real close to calling it done. I did some close up note editing , EQ changes and got the guitars panned away from the Vox tracks. That solved a lot of the problems. I'll probably do a little more work on the drums and let it rest for a while . Thanks .. mark @DeeringAmps Thanks Tom for the listen and comment. I used to Love listening to a "completely finished" song with my Bose QC2 headphones. (they've got a crackle in them now). Not very good in the early stages , as they made everything sound too good. Mine have been wired , taped up , epoxied back together so many times , I only use them for noise cancelling using my power tools. Later .. mark @DeeringAmps The final mix now reflects some drum changes suggested in your Next comment. I didn't want to bump the song back up , so I edited it here. Thanx .. mark Edited December 7, 2023 by mark skinner 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted December 6, 2023 Share Posted December 6, 2023 Still lovin’ it Mark! The only thing I would change; after “through the day” fades, I’d have the drummer bring back in the outro solo with a little more action. just my nickel98… t 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted December 7, 2023 Share Posted December 7, 2023 Hi Mark Very well written track - much prefer this latest remix, which sounds pretty close to me!! Very cool stuff Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted December 10, 2023 Share Posted December 10, 2023 I really enjoyed this one Mark! I love the way the guitars interplay and the mix sounds just perfect to my ear. Really nice, heartfelt vocals and great performances all around. I've listened to this with my vsx headphones and with my crappy bluetooth earbuds and it sounds great with both. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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