Mixed & Mastered on cakewalk, Thoughts? WARNING EXPLICIT LYRICS

[JEISONX]

Thoughts on this mix? 

WARNING EXPLICIT LYRICS

Edited January 5, 2021 by Wookiee
To add Lyric Warning in Title

[jack c.]

i record some hip hop rap at times.song needs to longer.nice job recording.add some bottom a tad.jack c.

[JEISONX]

Thank you  for your input Jack,I got a questions. Songs needs to be longer? why?

[jack c.]

Songs needs to be longer? why?

                     i guess any song can be as short or long as the composer desires.i like your song and for meself i'd like to hear more and maybe even go to some other changes beats,chords.jack c.

 

kick add some bottom a tad

[Wookiee]

Not my thing but it sounded like it had been put together well, the mix was balanced, I agree with @jack c. needs to be longer and more developed.

[JEISONX]

 

I appreciate your input @Wookiee ! By the way, what do you mean by more developed?

 

[Wookiee]

16 hours ago, JEISONX said:

what do you mean by more developed?

As your song progresses it does not change, the lyrical content does but the actual back/supporting music does, not whilst I appreciate that this to some extent is the nature of the genre you can make subtle changes that will keep the interest of the listener and allow you to extended your song.  You can change the nature of the Bass by adding a few additional notes that would allow you to repeat a vocal passage without it sounding like you are just repeating the same thing.

 

[JEISONX]

@Wookiee  I love this advise, Thank you!! I will definitely try to spice up the base in my next production. 

[mark skinner]

One thing I Really liked about this song was the "whisper" passages , I think I'll try that ..  mark

[JEISONX]

@mark skinner Right on!  glad you noticed that lol

[DeeringAmps]

Good advice from Wookiee for going forward, but I think this tune can stand on its own. Next tune expand a bit. 
tom

[Old Joad]

 

this rocks, nuff said?