JEISONX Posted January 3, 2021 Share Posted January 3, 2021 (edited) Thoughts on this mix? WARNING EXPLICIT LYRICS Edited January 5, 2021 by Wookiee To add Lyric Warning in Title 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted January 3, 2021 Share Posted January 3, 2021 i record some hip hop rap at times.song needs to longer.nice job recording.add some bottom a tad.jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JEISONX Posted January 3, 2021 Author Share Posted January 3, 2021 Thank you for your input Jack,I got a questions. Songs needs to be longer? why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted January 4, 2021 Share Posted January 4, 2021 Songs needs to be longer? why? i guess any song can be as short or long as the composer desires.i like your song and for meself i'd like to hear more and maybe even go to some other changes beats,chords.jack c. kick add some bottom a tad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted January 5, 2021 Share Posted January 5, 2021 Not my thing but it sounded like it had been put together well, the mix was balanced, I agree with @jack c. needs to be longer and more developed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JEISONX Posted January 5, 2021 Author Share Posted January 5, 2021 I appreciate your input @Wookiee ! By the way, what do you mean by more developed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted January 6, 2021 Share Posted January 6, 2021 16 hours ago, JEISONX said: what do you mean by more developed? As your song progresses it does not change, the lyrical content does but the actual back/supporting music does, not whilst I appreciate that this to some extent is the nature of the genre you can make subtle changes that will keep the interest of the listener and allow you to extended your song. You can change the nature of the Bass by adding a few additional notes that would allow you to repeat a vocal passage without it sounding like you are just repeating the same thing. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JEISONX Posted January 6, 2021 Author Share Posted January 6, 2021 @Wookiee I love this advise, Thank you!! I will definitely try to spice up the base in my next production. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted January 7, 2021 Share Posted January 7, 2021 One thing I Really liked about this song was the "whisper" passages , I think I'll try that .. mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JEISONX Posted January 7, 2021 Author Share Posted January 7, 2021 @mark skinner Right on! glad you noticed that lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted January 8, 2021 Share Posted January 8, 2021 Good advice from Wookiee for going forward, but I think this tune can stand on its own. Next tune expand a bit. tom 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Joad Posted January 8, 2021 Share Posted January 8, 2021 this rocks, nuff said? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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