Great song, I like a story teller tune. Sometimes I was wanting the vocal a little more in front and the reverb is a bit strong on everything. Nice work.
This is a pretty sparse mix of guitars for you, Different take on the song for sure. I thought the bass was a little hot and muddy. I like Susanne Vega too.
Good playing on here. Pretty dark tune. Lot's of different elements going on. The only thing I would change is the drums, they sound over compressed and mechanical.
Nice song, like the strings and guitar. The old days are definitely gone unfortunately . The reverb is a bit much for me and 5 minutes tests my short attention, but who cares it's your song.