Very creative arrangement, great song. Agree with the Peter Gabriel comparison, that was the first thing I thought before reading the comments, not bad to be compared to his work.
Great song, I like a story teller tune. Sometimes I was wanting the vocal a little more in front and the reverb is a bit strong on everything. Nice work.
This is a pretty sparse mix of guitars for you, Different take on the song for sure. I thought the bass was a little hot and muddy. I like Susanne Vega too.