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Much enjoyed here!

I think ?'s are in order.

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11 minutes ago, cclarry said:

Best Service Support is TOP NOTCH THE BEST! 

Fixed it for ya.

What the hell is Engine and why do I NOT need it?

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?'s Well done Anthony!

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Not familiar with Jackson, but Dylan's Subterranean Homesick Blues has a lot of lyrics.
It also has meter and rhyme.
I'm a little old school that way, meter and especially rhyme, are not cast in stone.
BUT, that's how I work. Bear in mind, generally, my collaborator writes the words;
I edit for meter and do melody.
I'd need a lead sheet on this to be specific, but its your tune.
You put it up for review and these are my thoughts/suggestions.
Worth exactly what you paid for them...
I am trying to encourage, rather than discourage.

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Ant, I'm no "expert" so take this with a grain of salt.

The lyrics are way too busy, you're barely getting each line in, and its not the tempo.
You've got to trim the "fat" here. In this case "less" would be way "more".
No where is it written that lyrics must rhyme or conform to some sense of meter; but most do.
Find the "focus" of each verse and state it; line by line. This is poetry, not prose.
Once you can deliver this without running out of breath, we'll talk about recording...

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14 minutes ago, whoisp said:

Yes a quality YouTube channel lol

Every "like" and "comment" helps.
I try to encourage the community take a minute and help our forum members out.
I'm afraid it mostly falls on "deaf" ears...

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as to small "m" mastering, I find it bewildering, but I "solider" on
getting a track "loud", there's a million limiters to "squash" a track with, its that professional "sheen" that eludes me

Very nice Tim, I especially like when the lower register comes in on the Piano (2:30ish mark for instance).

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Visually and musically very entertaining!

?'s

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can't believe I wasn't already subscribed over at YouTube, but I "fixed" it.
keep 'em coming...

30 minutes ago, Tim Smith said:

starts off rather abruptly

and the ending

30 minutes ago, Tim Smith said:

mix itself could use some work

I'll hold the like for the coming re-mix.
I think I'd try for bigger, bolder drums to give it that dance hall effect the image with it implies...

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I think the Songs section of the  Forum is where you should post this request. 
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On 12/31/2021 at 3:55 PM, mark skinner said:

Great job on the video  , the opening set up and credits was Very impressive.. 

+1 to that.

Lovely on all fronts!

?'s

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This is first rate all around. Really liked the Glarry!
And the SI strings worked nicely, not bad for a "freebie" huh?

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Another I missed, but better late than never.

?

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the vocal sounds great, I miss my old 688

Nice one Tim!
Evidently I'm hearing the re-mix, the sax is sitting nicely in the mix here.

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had hoped the link to sensual sax was a work you had used it in...

Brilliant as always Jerry!
Very much enjoyed the listen.

?'s

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Don't know how I missed this.
Love that kick!

?'s

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19 minutes ago, Bapu said:

never been frustrated by library load times

When Jim built the new machine 3 years ago it just made sense to go with the m.2.
The net result was the faster load times, one of those "unintended consequences" that didn't bite me in the a-$-$.
It was just recently (Legacy of Rock install) that I maxed out the 1TB capacity.
I think some of the Group Buy went on the secondary VSTi drive (EVO) as well.
Some put the OS on the m.2, and that seems like a "waste".
Keep the OS "lean & mean", 250gb EVO's are perfect.
But I digress...

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I can't say "Much Improved!" because this is/was a great tune.
I do feel the extra effort on the re-mix paid off!

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On 12/31/2021 at 8:29 AM, PhonoBrainer said:

incredible soundscape and it enhanced my morning evening here

the Tom's agree!

's?

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On 12/28/2021 at 6:42 AM, Tim Smith said:

can be a challenge to pick video or shoot video for music already made as a way to highlight the music itself

I'll second that, and you made it "jell" nicely.

On 12/30/2021 at 3:17 AM, SupaReels said:

Wow! Great legs Bjorn .... LOL.?

I was going to guess that was Bjorn's contribution to the vids.

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Who doesn't love the Duke and some Buster?

?

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On 12/29/2021 at 3:30 PM, Starship Krupa said:

Rather abrupt ending,

Only crit from me. Personally not a fan of the auto tune effect, but I can pour on some verb and delay so to each his own.

My father like to say "everything in moderation t, everything in moderation".

?

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Jack, your lyrics are always interesting.
Nowhere is it written that they must rhyme or conform to some sense of meter.
Although, I do believe in creative writing class rhyme and meter were stressed.
Keep 'em coming...

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Wow, I was absolutely sure I had hit "submit reply"

A masterful collaboration! Tres Bien!

?'s to all...

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its playing again, the first trip through I thought maybe push that vocal up a bit.
Having heard it once, I'm more familiar with it, but still think I'd push that fader up; its a "taste" thing

Yikes!
The hit machine just keeps rollin'!
Stay tuned folks, Wonder Why is just the start...

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