garybrun

@DallasSteve You should post your songs. Dont be put off by others and their productions. You should have heard mine when I first started. Everything i know I have learnt here.. and by posting and getting feedback you improve your craft. Its a nver ending learning curve. So go on... get posting and you'll be surprised the feedback you get on how to improve and how your posts helps others. Looking forward to hearing some of your stuff if you dare!!

Very good Barrie.. sounds great mate you should be proud of this one. ? if I was to be extremely picky I would say check your crossfades as there are some clicks in the "Left Channel" think its when your vocal comes in. 0.50, 1.06, 1.14, 1.22, 1.54, etc. Not many would pick up on that but they show up on my speakers.

Here is the video I made.. Not added the remix to it yet. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=siDo2jb52Pg

Thanks Mark... It was all down to the gainstaging... Gave it another go on V2

Cheers Jessie... Thanks so much for taking the time to listen.

Thanks so much for the helpful comments people... OK... less Duke Nuke Em... on MB. Yes.. the gain staging was off... missed it!! lol Thanks for all your time and comments...

Thanks for the comments and the listen. I agree with what you say. I have just been listening to the song for too long and will back down the limiter. Was experimenting with the Kush Bliyss...

One More Day. Thanks for taking the time to listen Larry and sharing your thoughts.

Im going to give my ears a rest and give it another go! Doubting myself! lol I understand what you are saying... I have used maybe a little too much saturation for warmth.. (tube added)

Thanks for the comments and taking the time to listen. Maybe I have crushed it to much.

Thanks for your ears Jack. We hadnt thought of a bass guitar.

Thanks Mark... thought I had got it wrong. ?

Thanks... the original version is there... maybe Im over doing things.

I posted this quite a while ago.. but have done a remix of it. Somehow there was something missing in my ears/eyes.. (it was a more powerful/sound/message). As I have learnt more over the years I am asking for opinions on this mix. There is a lot of emotion in my vocal... but I chose to leave it in. Though the vocal is not perfect I didn't want to loose that emotion. This was a calibration with @Grem and @Simeon Amburgey Thanks for taking the time to listen. Original

Very nice Mix Mark.

This turning out great Barry

I dont think you are far off.. but it takes a lot to hear the sonics with critical listening when the guitar is pushed to loud.

Very nice and soothing. Well done.

I would boost you vocal a little more so your message cuts through.

Hi Barry. You have a great talent for story telling. You also have in my opinion a lovely voice to express the story telling. I used to work as a proff singer years ago... you have the voice mate.. Sometimes its the story and the way it is sung.. sometimes pitch/or lack off doesnt make a song. People rave about bob Dylan... I don't like his voice at all... but his songs are fantastic. When people pay to see an artist they expect a very different standard and also modern music today is in my opinion too much in tune and in time that many songs dont breathe or move (groove). Please dont knock yourself back with feeling you have to be dead on pitch... you will loose Barry... becasue Barry will try and be something his uniqueness will prevent. hope you understand what I mean. Imperfections can make a great track!

Just bought this to see... Works well. Cakewalk Stream Deck Plugin

Add a little click to the kick.. it believe it will cut through with the added sound... just my thought.

When I mix live bands Barry I always put extra verb in the IEMs for the singers.,, your brain needs space. It helps keep on pitch.. maybe this will help you.

I haven't watched the video yet. Always listen first....Listening on my Focal Trio's Wasn't expecting phasor/flange on crash cymbals... made me smile. Nice choice of verb... really gave the distance of space feel. 3.57 Woodblock panning... very nice ? 4.46 Glass breaking... sounded like the guitar was throwing a paddy/pissed off! lol 5:58 Loved the Lead.. cuts through nicely. Very nice mixing with spacial awareness teasing me with reverb and delay. Mix even stands up well in mono on my avantones Very clever video... It is how I imagined it to be at the start without seeing it... pretty cool. In fact I turned this track up loud... sounds great. Well done Tom.. Only comment I would make for my taste would be a little click on the kick.. I cant fault this work mate. Thanks for the Aural Journey!