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Hey Douglas, another good track from you -- I enjoyed this -- Allan.

I'm glad you like the tune Freddy -- thanks for commenting.~~Allan.

oh yeah...a sad bump...

was written (music & lyrics) & performed (vocals, electric & acoustic guitars, bass guitar, keyboards, etc.) by me – home studio -- no autotune, melodyne and the like.. ©

Well, t you drew no lines but you did reference the song demo... I'm glad you like it -- thanks for listening and commenting -- much appreciated~~Allan.

Hey, I'm glad you like my demo dude~~Allan.

Thanks Nigel - I'm glad you liked that song demo (other than those box drums )~~Allan.

Hey Freddy, glad you like my tragi-comedy song and esp. the vox~~Allan.

Hey, Douglas, thanks for that -- glad you like those vox~~Allan.

Very good work Freddy -- a pleasure to listen to as always~~Allan.

Thank you Mark -- I'm pleased that you liked it.

Why, yes I am.

Hang on a second, let me get this foot to stop tapping. Okay. Man, first thing I noticed was the beautiful nasty tone on that Peavey -- harp was very good (I thought of J. Geils Band) --really like the bridge chord changes -- that was a surprise -- vox was spot on as were the on-point lyrics -- in fact, the only thing I didn't like was that there was not enough of your tasty slide -- good stuff~~Allan.

Nice work Mark -- the mix is great and vox are right in the blues pocket as is the instrumentation -- like that bit at the end with the harp -- another good one from you~~Allan.

Terrific 80s sound on this (of course, that also makes it a 2020 sound) -- much like Michael Franks doing some new wavey stuff (but alas he never did) -- the mix is fantastic and everything sounds great -- good work~~Allan.

Thanks for that Paul -- and thanks for your intrepid commenting.

HATFM & fub-fud

Very nicely done -- I particularly like the way it switched gears around 2:10 -- my only nit is the synth vox -- I think by now those synth choir voice things are archaic and should be retired -- my opinion of course, who knows? Anyway, good work~~Allan.

A moody sound that's kinda different for you Freddy but you really put across the emotion of this~~and with your usual sweet guitar tones--another good one in the Freddy Cannon (!)~~Allan.

Hey, you've got that 80s thing down solid -- good demo of your song~~Allan.

Hey thanks much -- glad ya like it.

Hey Douglas, thank you. I'm glad you like the tune and I appreciate your take on the vox and lyrics~~Allan.

Hey Paul, this is a terrific demo of your song -- mix is bright and clear and the vox are spot on -- only nit there is that the lead vocal could come down a tad but whatever -- also some unusual chord changes -- good one~~Allan.

MTCA - to be reposted.