FMented Posted November 29, 2019 Share Posted November 29, 2019 (edited) Have a nice day everyone. Edited December 1, 2019 by FMented Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garybrun Posted November 29, 2019 Share Posted November 29, 2019 Sorry but the link doesnt work for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted November 29, 2019 Share Posted November 29, 2019 Some heavy guitars to be sure, but as soon as they hit, all I hear of the drums is that crash panned hard left. If the waveform that BL is showing is anywhere near accurate you've "slammed" the mix; for me it makes it a bit hard to "hear" all instruments. @garybrunyou need to sign into your BandLab account; I find that annoying, but evidently that's how BL works. FM I hope you find some constructive criticism in all that, you've got some things going on and I'd like to hear it all. Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted November 30, 2019 Share Posted November 30, 2019 13 hours ago, garybrun said: Sorry but the link doesnt work for me. Or me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted November 30, 2019 Share Posted November 30, 2019 Link works fine on my computer, AFTER logging into BandLab. Does not work on my phone, even after logging into BandLab (this is via firefox). Maybe if I add the BandLab app to my phone? I don't think I'm so inclined... Tom 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
User 905133 Posted November 30, 2019 Share Posted November 30, 2019 (edited) 13 minutes ago, DeeringAmps said: Link works fine on my computer, AFTER logging into BandLab. Same here; had to log into BandLab on my PC. (Now I need to find out how to direct BandLab's audio to my current audio device.) Edited November 30, 2019 by User 905133 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted November 30, 2019 Share Posted November 30, 2019 @FMented Link did not work here either and I am logged in to Bandlab. A search found you but not sure what tune any chance of a clue as to which one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FMented Posted December 1, 2019 Author Share Posted December 1, 2019 Sorry guys, I just edited the link, Something went wrong on bandlab app I think. I also can't open it right now, so annoying. Sorry guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FMented Posted December 1, 2019 Author Share Posted December 1, 2019 (edited) On 11/30/2019 at 5:25 AM, garybrun said: Sorry but the link doesnt work for me. On 11/30/2019 at 6:33 PM, SPAK said: Or me On 11/30/2019 at 11:42 PM, Wookiee said: @FMented Link did not work here either and I am logged in to Bandlab. A search found you but not sure what tune any chance of a clue as to which one? On 11/30/2019 at 9:57 PM, User 905133 said: Same here; had to log into BandLab on my PC. (Now I need to find out how to direct BandLab's audio to my current audio device.) On 11/30/2019 at 6:54 AM, DeeringAmps said: Some heavy guitars to be sure, but as soon as they hit, all I hear of the drums is that crash panned hard left. If the waveform that BL is showing is anywhere near accurate you've "slammed" the mix; for me it makes it a bit hard to "hear" all instruments. @garybrunyou need to sign into your BandLab account; I find that annoying, but evidently that's how BL works. FM I hope you find some constructive criticism in all that, you've got some things going on and I'd like to hear it all. To Omg this is so annoying, sorry for inconvenience guys. I just re-upload it to SoundCloud. Thanks for your criticism guys. Edited December 1, 2019 by FMented Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted December 2, 2019 Share Posted December 2, 2019 FMented I like it. Nice driving beat with really interesting stuff going on. The mix does need some work to bring out the individual instruments more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted December 2, 2019 Share Posted December 2, 2019 I also like it. I love the driving guitars. There is a lot of very nice instrumentation going on but as pointed out above a touch of work on the mix might separate the instruments a bit more. It strikes me that this song would be good background music for some adventure type of video or movie. Nice one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FMented Posted December 2, 2019 Author Share Posted December 2, 2019 2 hours ago, bjornpdx said: FMented I like it. Nice driving beat with really interesting stuff going on. The mix does need some work to bring out the individual instruments more. Thanks mate ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FMented Posted December 2, 2019 Author Share Posted December 2, 2019 2 hours ago, freddy j said: I also like it. I love the driving guitars. There is a lot of very nice instrumentation going on but as pointed out above a touch of work on the mix might separate the instruments a bit more. It strikes me that this song would be good background music for some adventure type of video or movie. Nice one! Thank you buddy. ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted December 2, 2019 Share Posted December 2, 2019 Tad hot and rammed up against the buffers @FMented without the music many songs would be not worth the effort so do not knock the instrumental. All songs are instrumentals with someone wailing over them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiller Posted December 2, 2019 Share Posted December 2, 2019 Promising but the mix sounds hot and undefined. I’m looking forward to hearing a remix.?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FMented Posted December 3, 2019 Author Share Posted December 3, 2019 Thanks guys for your input and help ? Hopefully I can do better next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
congalocke Posted December 8, 2019 Share Posted December 8, 2019 (edited) \m/ Love the opening drum beat and either guitars, (programmed or a Delay...sounds great!) and I like what you're doing with the piano as well weaving all this together. Hard to hear in the mix but the orchestration sounds kewl and I really like it! It's reminiscent of what I enjoy in listening to the Tubular Bells intro. Good work... Edited December 8, 2019 by congalocke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted December 8, 2019 Share Posted December 8, 2019 Some very thoughtful musical ideas, builds, and over all still very listenable. Mix thoughts? Maybe start with a listen to the hi-hats and cymbals. Super compressed and flangey. Not much headroom for dynamic playing. no soft, no loud, all just pretty up there. Next I hear how those hi hats are completely masking the snare. I think you want the snare as much as the hi hats, at least? You might try taking the compressor(s) off of the drums. See where that leads you? What compressors are you using? Your song is very much worth some mixing experimentation. Enjoy! -Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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