SUPAREELS Posted January 2 Share Posted January 2 (edited) Edited January 4 by SUPAREELS 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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KSband Posted January 3 Share Posted January 3 Cool groove, kind of Peter Gabriel sounding song, very nice. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted January 4 Share Posted January 4 Hi Steve - I like this a lot - as KS said, a bit of a Peter Gabriel vibe, in a very good way. this really is a well written and recorded track cool stuff Nigel 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted January 4 Author Share Posted January 4 17 hours ago, KSband said: Cool groove, kind of Peter Gabriel sounding song, very nice. 3 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: Hi Steve - I like this a lot - as KS said, a bit of a Peter Gabriel vibe, in a very good way. this really is a well written and recorded track cool stuff Nigel Many thanks for listening, for me it's a bit bubblegumy but my concentration was on production and mixdown, something you do in spades Nigel ! I absolutely love to think this has a Gabriel vibe ... so thanks for that KS ATB Steve 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted January 4 Share Posted January 4 well done.pink floyd.jack c 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted January 4 Share Posted January 4 I like the wavy feeling. I like the changes in intensity. I like the message. I like the guitar and singing. I guess whats not to like ! Very nice enjoyable work 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted January 5 Share Posted January 5 I Really enjoyed that. Loved the percussion sounds and the smooth laid back vibe.. mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted January 5 Author Share Posted January 5 23 minutes ago, mark skinner said: I Really enjoyed that. Loved the percussion sounds and the smooth laid back vibe.. mark Many thanks Mark for your comments Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted January 6 Share Posted January 6 This is so good! Great feel to melodies, vocals and the whole arrangement. Love this, don't change a thing. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted January 6 Share Posted January 6 I liked it best of all for the varied tonal palette, and the "Pink Gabriel" vibe. The chorus hits in a good way, very catchy. I wonder if your guitar lead noodle in the chorus might mask the chorus vocals a bit? Might be worth a check. You might also be prepared to explain to the kids what "writing letters" was. 🙄 Excellent tune and a polished production! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted January 6 Author Share Posted January 6 8 hours ago, equality said: This is so good! Great feel to melodies, vocals and the whole arrangement. Love this, don't change a thing. Thanks for the compliment and listening 👍 Steve 32 minutes ago, PhonoBrainer said: I liked it best of all for the varied tonal palette, and the "Pink Gabriel" vibe. The chorus hits in a good way, very catchy. I wonder if your guitar lead noodle in the chorus might mask the chorus vocals a bit? Might be worth a check. You might also be prepared to explain to the kids what "writing letters" was. 🙄 Excellent tune and a polished production! I seem to be going through a dry patch at the moment and the song has taken me some 6 weeks to write and finish. I always take on board your observations and I'm made up you listened and commented .. so thanks. I'll have a check on the guitar as I'm awful, even after all these years of playing ! Thanks again M8 Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyB01 Posted January 6 Share Posted January 6 I like the slightly dark undertone and the arrangement, my only minor crit is I am not a huge fan of the instrument at around 2:30 (is it a pad)? It just seemed a little out of place with being such a high register, but this is just a matter of taste and doesn't mean you should change it. Overall really nice job. Andy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted January 7 Author Share Posted January 7 14 hours ago, AndyB01 said: I like the slightly dark undertone and the arrangement, my only minor crit is I am not a huge fan of the instrument at around 2:30 (is it a pad)? It just seemed a little out of place with being such a high register, but this is just a matter of taste and doesn't mean you should change it. Overall really nice job. Andy Hi Andy, I take your crit and not sure I agree, but as you say, it's a matter of taste ... I guess if I was honest I would love to have dropped a guitar track in there, but I'm not that proficient so it's the Irish pipe + FX LOL Thankyou for listening and your comments much appreciated. ATB Steve 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted Friday at 07:45 AM Share Posted Friday at 07:45 AM Beautiful song, Steve. That percussive beat in the background works really well. There's something about the guitar during the chorus that really boosts the emotions (in me anyway) Great job as always. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted Friday at 03:52 PM Author Share Posted Friday at 03:52 PM 7 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Beautiful song, Steve. That percussive beat in the background works really well. There's something about the guitar during the chorus that really boosts the emotions (in me anyway) Great job as always. -Bjorn Hi M8 ..Wishing you and the misses a great new year 👊 Many thanks for the comments, The story is for my eldest daughter ( Plus 3 kids ) she had a pretty bad relationship with her husband, unbeknown to us how bad he treated her and the kids ... really screwed them up ... she is trying to move on and doing well ... this song was just a message to let her know we're always here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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