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This is a great piece Rex, and I like it very much as is.  But... If you ask me, I think it's crying out for maracas. I swear I can hear them even though they're not  there. I know its easy for me to say: "just put some maracas in". Maracas are damn hard to get right. But I think they could add an appropriate flavor. - Dan

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Your voice is an absolute pleasure to listen to, your writing is tight and expressive and works well with the melody .. the only thing I may have changed would be the guitar loop .. perhaps a little variation .. or is it just me ! Danno

Great work .. again

Steve

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Hmm more variety on the guitar arpeggio would add some colour I think. First class work again though, different style for you but same high quality of execution.

Well done ?

Andy

Posted
1 hour ago, garybrun said:

I can play the link an can see it here..

At the risk, read what I said, there "was" no active link. That implies when I checked the thread there was not an active link, it doesn't mean the situation hasn't changed from when I checked  ?

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1 hour ago, Wookiee said:

At the risk, read what I said, there "was" no active link. That implies when I checked the thread there was not an active link, it doesn't mean the situation hasn't changed from when I checked  ?

Sorry mate...  maybe I am misunderstanding.
Can you play the track now?
 

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Posted

Very nice as usual and the Brazilian style puts it in a different genre, bossa nova crooning? The guitar fits in well with the theme. Didn't really notice any issue with it.
-Bjorn

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50 minutes ago, garybrun said:

Sorry mate...  maybe I am misunderstanding.
Can you play the track now?
 

Haven't tried, thanks for asking,  been busy last few days sorting the room treatment for my now studio room. 

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Posted (edited)

As always a great track with incredible vocals- but I want to hear a better bass line. The current one sounds auto generated.

And definitely needs more interest and changes in the percussion. 

I was thinking one more instrument like a flute or ? That only shows up once somewhere with a counter melody fill. 
We call it “Ear Candy “. 
Just little things hidden in the background that are in your peripheral hearing. 

Edited by John Vere
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Posted

I like the song. If I was going to add something, I would add a bit more of a walking bass line. Something to accent the drumline.  Otherwise nice song and I love your voice.

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