noynekker Posted October 16, 2022 Share Posted October 16, 2022 Hey Everyone . . . something I've been tinkering with recently . . . a bit different for me, since I had lyrics completed first (guess we just call that a poem) then built a vocal + song + chord structure afterwards, poof, a song . . . let me know if it needs more tinkering ? 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted October 17, 2022 Share Posted October 17, 2022 Bruce , Fantastic space around the "tight" instrumentation. I really liked the energy this one had from the beginning to the very end. You did a Steller job on the main vocals and also all the harmony. Superb job on everything ! If I were to tinker with anything , it might be to brighten the main vocal a little. The last chorus and outro seemed brighter , probably your singing changed a little as you went on. It also seemed to be leaning a little bit to the left ?? I reversed my headphones and the lean followed. I'm listening on a laptop with "not so flat" headphones , so the EQ suggestion may just be my monitoring. Anyway .. Great writing and performance ! Loved it mark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted October 17, 2022 Share Posted October 17, 2022 Sounds really good, everything is nice and clear. Good changes going on too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted October 18, 2022 Author Share Posted October 18, 2022 @mark skinner @KSband Thanks for the positive feedback, much appreciated ! Yes Mark, I hear what you mean about the vocal EQ, a little too thick in the bottom, and I also listened on some different systems today and concluded the Kick really needs more definition in the mix, a certain higher mid frequency to help it punch through, I think the overall drum feel would be better . . . so still working it some more. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted October 18, 2022 Share Posted October 18, 2022 Hi Enjoyed this, a good song. well performed and I thought the mix was pretty good - noticed your remarks re the drums - what are you using for drums on this? Cool Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted October 19, 2022 Author Share Posted October 19, 2022 15 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: Hi Enjoyed this, a good song. well performed and I thought the mix was pretty good - noticed your remarks re the drums - what are you using for drums on this? Cool Nigel Hey Nigel . . . FYI, the drum programming here is BFD3 Thanks for having a listen ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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