daryl1968 Posted July 24, 2022 Share Posted July 24, 2022 Hi fine folk It's been a while and I apologize for my absence. Here's a new song. Nits and crits welcome. Lyrics below link https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/oqrjE The Comeback V1 After years of silence there's no coming back Into a world that's used to constant exposure Your gonna start all over with a catchy track But the world's not ready for this poseur Ch And there's a glimmer of hope with every brand new tune This is the one that's gonna break on through V2 There was a moment of brief success a few years back Something tells me that fame has long passed by No one remembers about the ageing hack With a songbook full and a dream that's over Ch 2 You could give up the ghost or write a banging tune You could write it for them or just for you There's a glimmer of hope with every brand new tune This is the one that's gonna break on through 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted July 24, 2022 Share Posted July 24, 2022 Catchy pop song, nicely done. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted July 24, 2022 Share Posted July 24, 2022 Hi Definitely a catchy track and well done - nice mix Cool Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted July 24, 2022 Share Posted July 24, 2022 Daryl, great to see you! Like your song. It's catchy. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted July 25, 2022 Share Posted July 25, 2022 It's catchy in a good way mate, not like an STD. ? 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barry Seymour Posted July 25, 2022 Share Posted July 25, 2022 (edited) Catchy and sweet. I hear a little Alan Parsons in there. Can't hear anything to criticize in the mix. Neat. Edited July 25, 2022 by Barry Seymour 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyB01 Posted July 25, 2022 Share Posted July 25, 2022 Nice one Daryl, lovely composition. Enjoyed it - no crits. Andy 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted July 25, 2022 Share Posted July 25, 2022 @daryl1968 Nice catchy little tune. Mix works well here. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted July 25, 2022 Share Posted July 25, 2022 Beautiful mix. I honestly don't know how this could be improved at all. Nice .. mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted July 25, 2022 Share Posted July 25, 2022 Having followed your work for s o o long it's good to hear your back ...but I feel an underlying message in this song so I hope it makes the break and it pays your bills ...well deserved commendation mate ..liked it a lot ATB Steve ( Supareels_Music) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larry T. Posted July 27, 2022 Share Posted July 27, 2022 excellent song, production, mix....the whole thing....has a beautiful feel to it that reminds me of Everything But the Girl's best songs ???? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hidden Symmetry Posted July 27, 2022 Share Posted July 27, 2022 Glad you're releasing more new material. The tune is your classic unique style which I enjoy. The mix sounds great here too, perfect for the style. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
markno999 Posted July 27, 2022 Share Posted July 27, 2022 Daryl, Good track and great to hear your music again, you have a very unique sound that is instantly recognizable. Your lyrics are always clever but I particularly like the lyrics on this song, I think many can identify with the message:) Super enjoyable listen. Regards 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted July 27, 2022 Share Posted July 27, 2022 Really well constructed liked the way the vollums changed nothing was forced rally liked the finger clicking i the verses 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted July 28, 2022 Share Posted July 28, 2022 Hi Daryl, Great to hear another song from you . Very nice arrangement of piano and strings and quite a catchy tune. Hope to hear more from you. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted July 31, 2022 Author Share Posted July 31, 2022 On 7/24/2022 at 10:27 AM, KSband said: Catchy pop song, nicely done. Thanks so much On 7/24/2022 at 11:12 AM, Bajan Blue said: Hi Definitely a catchy track and well done - nice mix Cool Nigel Thanks Nigel. Very kind of you On 7/24/2022 at 7:51 PM, David Sprouse said: Daryl, great to see you! Like your song. It's catchy. Thanks David - good to see you too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted July 31, 2022 Author Share Posted July 31, 2022 On 7/24/2022 at 8:54 PM, Bapu said: It's catchy in a good way mate, not like an STD. ? Ha. Cheers Baps On 7/25/2022 at 2:38 AM, Barry Seymour said: Catchy and sweet. I hear a little Alan Parsons in there. Can't hear anything to criticize in the mix. Neat. Much appreciated Barry. Thanks On 7/25/2022 at 5:16 AM, AndyB01 said: Nice one Daryl, lovely composition. Enjoyed it - no crits. Andy Thanks so much Andy. Hope you are well mate 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted July 31, 2022 Author Share Posted July 31, 2022 On 7/25/2022 at 8:08 AM, Wookiee said: @daryl1968 Nice catchy little tune. Mix works well here. Thanks Wookster me old mate On 7/25/2022 at 9:38 AM, mark skinner said: Beautiful mix. I honestly don't know how this could be improved at all. Nice .. mark Thanks so much Mark. That means a lot On 7/25/2022 at 9:38 AM, STEVE POOLE said: Having followed your work for s o o long it's good to hear your back ...but I feel an underlying message in this song so I hope it makes the break and it pays your bills ...well deserved commendation mate ..liked it a lot ATB Steve ( Supareels_Music) Thanks a ton Steve. You're very kind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted July 31, 2022 Share Posted July 31, 2022 Hey Daryl -- glad to see you back and posting new songs on the forum. Excellent catchy and memorable song. Love the finger snaps!!!! Great vocals and harmonies!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted August 1, 2022 Share Posted August 1, 2022 On 7/31/2022 at 12:25 PM, freddy j said: glad to see you back and posting new songs me too, same thing! On 7/24/2022 at 5:54 PM, Bapu said: not like an STD had a moment of my "adult onset tourette's" (hey I'm an American with disability), but thought better of it ? ? t 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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