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Bob , Very nice and relaxing song , I really Enjoyed it . Personally I wouldn't "release" one without sending it here first . I've made some pretty drastic improvements from the comments and suggestions from the pros here on the forum.   mark

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Bob . . . liked listening to this, great and natural acoustic feel to it . . . I should say that the level seems a bit lower than other online tunes I have heard here tonight, might want to address that ? . . . but I adjusted my volume very slightly, and enjoyed it a lot.

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Thanks to everyone who listened and commented. I brought the level up a bit, and it sounds better now- thanks for letting me know it was too low.

Regards,

Bob

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What a beautiful song!

One little thing that you might consider is a rephrasing of the words "in it" and "minute" around the :50 mark. My .02 centavos would be, it would be a stronger cadence to cut those two short, not sustained "innnnnnnnnn -it" as they are. Just a suggestion of course.

 

Your melody really fits perfectly over those chords. Sweet tune.

cheers,

-Tom

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