whoisp Posted September 3, 2020 Share Posted September 3, 2020 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted September 7, 2020 Share Posted September 7, 2020 This is a beautiful song that deserves to be heard. I'm reminded of the 90's band Live in the vocal department, which is good because I liked them a lot. I'm missing some degree of "punch" here and there for contrast, but overall, this song satisfies me. With an adjustment or two, this mix is on the edge of being stellar. Good work! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted September 7, 2020 Share Posted September 7, 2020 Great song ! You've got a U2 feel to it , especially near the end. I I can't wait to hear what else you come up with If this was your first CbB song. If you ask for suggestions or help with a mix when you post it , the people here are great about pointing out issues you song has , that you may not notice. Lots of people here remix a few times using suggestions , then add a video. Good job and hope to hear more .. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyB01 Posted September 7, 2020 Share Posted September 7, 2020 Wow what a rich tapestry of sound, agree that parts of the mix could use more punch but there are some lovely tones on there. Very good work. Andy 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garybrun Posted September 7, 2020 Share Posted September 7, 2020 Very nice for your first song. Well done. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted September 8, 2020 Share Posted September 8, 2020 I loved the mix , the drums were really good lots of good fills well produced 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted September 8, 2020 Share Posted September 8, 2020 Nice track musically, seems well played and captured. Not sure what the subject mater of the lyrics is but I suspect I would not comment on them. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted September 12, 2020 Share Posted September 12, 2020 On 9/8/2020 at 1:33 AM, Wookiee said: Not sure what the subject mater of the lyrics is Often that's the mark of good songwriting, let the listener take it where he/she needs to go... On 9/7/2020 at 2:35 PM, garybrun said: Very nice for your first song Well I doubt this is Agent P's first run at songwriting, but it does seem he has "bonded" with CbB. A little crit (or not), I found the guitar "scratches" right and left at 2:11 and 2:14 a bit "jarring" (too loud), but you returned to that (sorta) at 3:43 going into the outro so I get it; me, I turn it down a little. Your song, your production... ? tom just so Agent P knows, that's tom with a small "t"; lots of Toms on the forum 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted September 12, 2020 Share Posted September 12, 2020 Really a beautiful song. The vocals are very well done indeed. This has a great commercial sound and sounds as if it should receive air play. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jim Fogle Posted September 13, 2020 Share Posted September 13, 2020 Nice production. I would be interested in knowing the total number of tracks on this song, how many are instrumental and how many are vocal. As others indicated, I don't think this is your first audio production. Stellar arangement. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted September 13, 2020 Share Posted September 13, 2020 What a great voice! I'll bet you have a good range. Thank god for angels, no? The acoustic guitar needs to be better articulated. Sounds like it might be an ovation? With a few improvements this'd be stellar like lynn said. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jim Fogle Posted September 13, 2020 Share Posted September 13, 2020 (edited) 32 minutes ago, David Sprouse said: The acoustic guitar needs to be better articulated. Sounds like it might be an ovation? With a few improvements this'd be stellar like lynn said. @David Sprouse, I agree. @whoisp The acoustic sounds like you used a built-in bridge piezo pickup. You may want to consider using an external microphone to add a little wood to the acoustic sound. Edited September 13, 2020 by Jim Fogle 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evan Hayley Posted September 13, 2020 Share Posted September 13, 2020 I love this! Beautiful song and well produced for a first song especially. Good voice also. The lyrics seem to be very positive but I'll have to listen again to catch them all 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whoisp Posted January 20, 2021 Author Share Posted January 20, 2021 Sorry guys, my notification email was on spam mode so i got no notifications. So big thanks for the beautiful comments. I've done 4 more since to get get use to Calkwalk as ive never used daw and ive been bitten with the calkwalk vibe, loving this software so awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whoisp Posted January 20, 2021 Author Share Posted January 20, 2021 On 9/13/2020 at 2:23 AM, Jim Fogle said: Nice production. I would be interested in knowing the total number of tracks on this song, how many are instrumental and how many are vocal. As others indicated, I don't think this is your first audio production. Stellar arangement. Wisdom was my first song on DAW and the only time i have used a DAW, however i moved from a 25yr old Boss 8track so i have some base knowledge with terminology for a foundation etc This was 12 tracks, but most of those tracks are broken into sections. Used two tracks to write the drums, and two vocal as i didn't know about vocal comping which i will try on my next song ? Yes the acoustic was my fault and a poor job, my faith built in pickup as a great sound but was a terrible take and level with old strings now replaced. I guess i could use comping on the guitar two haha. I used a combination of subtle strings that take up the tracks and couple of fx tracks i use to add bit here and there for ambiance or to make something stand out. My mixing as improved and this was a very poor show at mastering which as also improved. I am one of those creative artists that as loads of ideas, play all instruments and do everything myself, so i don't spend enough time to perfect a song, i get frustrated quickly and want to move onto another song asap so rush, so i need to learn some lessons with my post productions and make it easier on myself doing better takes. That's why the comping sounds good which is my next mission to learn, thanx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted January 20, 2021 Share Posted January 20, 2021 wonderful job recording.rhythm guitar add a tab more bottom and or less highs on it.what vst plugins effects do ya use for mixing mastering?jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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