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Paul Bush

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  1. Yep , Great feel of a song  , revereb and echo just really does the trick , not over complicated you kept it simple , its so easy to over import other intruments so goes the old blues saying `` less is more´´  you nailed it  great song cheers

  2. On 9/30/2020 at 5:53 PM, Kevin Walsh said:

    Great tune! This reminds me of the great male vocal acts of the 60s like Neil Diamond and Gary Puckett. Nice to hear people making music like that still. 

    My only real nit is the relatively  unchanging nature of the rhythm section. I think more attention to building and releasing energy as the song progresses would take this song to another level, particularly around the guitar solo.

    Really good vocals with an engaging m elody!

    Not sure if you had a listen to my last song  ``Joyriding,´´ also with quite good vocals 

     

  3. Hi Kevin thanks for your comments , to be honest I was  a bit worried that the bass was going to be a bit boring after a while , I should have changed It during  chorus,  I was thinking of adding a bit more synth but the the song would have been even longer due to the intro being so long ( I liked it that way though) in hinsight I didnt have an overall  concept and didnt map out the song ,  cheers Pb

  4. Hi Daryl, you are speaking to the man of short intro`s  and a man of dam short trousers , I hate long intro`s  myself but in this case I just thought it worked with this type of ..dare I say it   alan parsons type insipired song  albeit with not so many electric keys etc although i take your point one could nod off before the song  gets going ..haha   cheers Pb

  5. Hi well thanks chaps , all your comments mean a great deal t to me as Ive been using Bandlab for just over a year and I feel with every recording I´m making slight improvemants .You`re  not going to blieve this but I mastered from wave onto mp3 and boosted the bottom end so that i could to post onto soundcloud and on uplouding to SC all the cymballs developed  a chorus effect and were distorted so I deleted and posted just the wave file  I´m not sure why this happened ? cheers P

  6. Hi chaps,  well here´s the thing I always wanted to write a chugga chugga chugga type bass line rock song and I came up with this ,(work in progress ) its my  first attempt so its not finished and the fill guitars need tweeking  and I have no outro written as of today but I think you`ll get the jist of my timming problems

    Have a gander at my   ``Rock n Roll cliche ´´ cheers PB

    RnR cliche MP3 demo.mp3

  7. I liked the loose easy going recording it all seemed efortlessly (is that a word?) to meander along , a sort of take it or leave it attitude yep i liked it cheers

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  8. Hi t, yes I ran out of steam towards the end I should have added another eight barres and then slowly  faded out   ; i try to keep within the 3:30 time limit which is silly  really ,although there´s nothing worse than a song dragging for too long of which i am also previuosly  gulity  of  , cheers Pb

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