Paul Bush

On 4/27/2021 at 5:05 PM, Wookiee said:

This has potential and once you have added the final polish I am sure it will work, I will wait for that final mix before making further comment.

Thanks for taking the time to comment Wookie , I´ve re recorded the bass and the keys , I´m off for a lay down and I´ll do a new mix cheers

On 4/24/2021 at 10:03 AM, garybrun said:

Noynekker covered what I would recognise.
Nice vocal and backing vocals.

This is going to be goodun!

Hi Gary , thanks for the nice comments , It started out as a  bit of ``cliche´´  three chord thing , as soon as the oohs popped up it changed the structure a tad and made it more slightly more intresting , that said nothing wrong with musical cliche`s  all my songs are based on them cheers

Great guitar riffs, chord structure, this is the real deal  this one is  top notch  thanks for making me  re-evaluate my petty songs , now I know how Eric Clapton felt when he saw Jimi Hendrix live  .......cheeeers  

I cant explain why ,but I like it ,its got that indie off grid technicolour sound  maybe the cover photo influenced me  , it sounds like a soundtrack from  a independant film  cheers 

Uhmmmmm meandering along nicely,  could listen to this for hour`s cheers

RR great vocals love the harmonies theyre so difficlut to do , I really struggle with mine so I can appriciate the hard work you `ve put in well done cheers

super recording, and guitar work, vocals lots in there great song

Hi Noynekker , youre spot on with those timing issues , I couldnt for the life of me pinpoint them myself although I used the same 4/4 ezdrum patterns ??? as the rest of the song , so Ive changed the piano-guitar  parts and i think it sounds better , I was trying to add some dynamics to the build up with keys , it  just didnt work,  basically because I´m not a pianist , so thanks once again for your honest input , its always welcome, and as for the photo...... It was just one that was left over from EU ID card  , I do however have another one where I´m donning a pair of leopard motive jockey ........ , maybe i´ll ................probally not  cheers

I just love your melodies ,  harmonies , and well the text is just a bit quirky and thats good . great original song cheers

Yeah from the first note its quality , great stuff I´m a fan .thanks for sharing ,

I´m just so jealous of the whole thing ,so much there great production ,song muscianship the lot   top notch ..

I´m just going to concure with all the previous comments , really great female vocal, so clear  and of course the bass great track cheeers

Just sublime tones and textures in this one wookie , it took me with it,  right to the last drop..  .. .  cheers

Great strat tone , I always add too many instruments to my mixes , I really like te stripped down feel to this great makes everything so clear and transparent clever welll done cheers

Hi Chaps , here´s a new one  with just a rough mix to see what response/ tips I get  to polish it off , cheers ..ps sorry about the photo like i said it was all done on the hoof  , Gawd where`s the makeup girl when you need her

Liked it a lot, great recording just lovely pulled at my emotions  cheers ..

I know you`ll all think I´m wierd but I`d love to  hear african singing -chanting in the background,  after along day in the bush comming home under the setting sun tall grass in motion ..yes cant get those visions out of my head , very nice listened to it many a time cheers David great track

Bend over Moneypenny I think Ive got a message from pussygalore , O.k enough this......this should be in a Quentin Tarantino film  just love those guitar tones cheers

And I´m still strugling with my three chords,and the (Barry Manilow school of songwriting)   Oh bugger!  puts me to shame  great track  JS cheers

The whole thing is sort of I dont care, this is the song, take it or leave it type attitude, I  just loved it , it could do with tightening up but then it would lose its ..I dont know ,.... yeah....... great lyrics by the way  cheers .. I could say much more , but it wouldnt make any more sense ..cheers

Captivating , just great  cheers , cant say more than  that ..

It lifted the top of my head off ,........ great stuff wookie cheers .....

What can i say ? hell of a lot of of work in there  super production cheers ..

Yeah Barry always a joy to hear your vocals , another good song , just lovely ..great production as always ..cheers

Well I´m up to my armpits in swamp on this one just waiting for some vocals lovely mix just as the e-guitar came in toward the end Ry Cooder style would have sealed the deal for me  do some more please cheers