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Nice one RexRed, love the organ sounds. Not a muddy mess in my ears. You could try to crank up the volume on both the organ and drums.

First post updated with an acustic version as well!

Nice!

Haha, nice one Bjorn. Always enjoy your creative lyrics.

Great tune ABull, liked it alot!

Nice track, lovely lyrics.

Nice job, love the dreamy vocals!

Thank you very much for your feedback and kind words. The first sound (absolute beginning) is Zebra 2, and the bassline is VPS Avenger.

Hey Jude, thank you!

Thank you very much, and i will take the feedback with for future songs.

Wow! Great vocals, groovey and spacey guitars. Love it.

Great tune and great vocals, they could be a tiny bit louder in my ears. Very much Peter Gabriel as someone else pointed out.

Nice track, agree that it begs for vocals. Especially like the organ parts.

Thank you very much Douglas.

Thank you very much Lynn for your kind words, glad you like!

Thank you very much David! I absolutely get what you mean.

Thank you very much Steve for your kind words and support. The inspiration for the lyrics is this growing group of men in society and online that seem to be lost, not really know their place in life. No purpose, very bitter and often lonely. He could be dangerous, like a ticking bomb. But he doesnt have to be, its all up to the listener.

Thank you very much Bjorn. Yeah my lyrics are always very vague on purpose, this one is no exception. The whole point being as you said for the listener to make up their own story.

Thank you very much Tom! Yes, they are guitars.

Thank you very much Gary for both your feedback and kind words.

Thank you very much Jimmy, Melody of Peace sounds nice. ?

definitely Thank you very much Tom. Yes, there is definately a little bit of delay going on on the vocals. The drums are maybe a bitt simple in arrangement but that is kinda how i like them. Not the biggest fan of toms.

Thank you very much for your feedback and kind words.

Thank you very much Andrew, yea i prefer to leave much of the story up to the listeners imagination and not say everything out loud.

Thank you very much kakku for listening and your kind words. ♥️