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I welcome have had mix feedback and see other posts ask for mix feedback and also others get mix feedback. So I think it happens here. I will have a look at the sites you mentioned.

Ambitious. I’m just curious what you would hope to get from deeper more q and a type interactions about your work vs shorter feedback critique posts typical here I think. You seem very self directed and intentional. Maybe somewhere on Reddit ?

Very emotional lyrics and mood. Full of need a blend of sorrow but upbeat drive in the music so not dreary. Sounds great and enjoyed the video too.

Catchy title. Sounds great all around. Nice sax too.

Interesting, odd, well put together. I like the mix. I like how you bring things in and out and switch things up but it is cohesive. I like the steampunk looking skyboat thingy. Good work !

Heres my genuine feedback, I always aim to be genuine and hope folks do the same for my songs. Sounds ominous. Which matches your words. So good atmosphere. As far as the mix, my only feedback is the distorted instrument that underlies the song is a little smothering (maybe not a bad thing ha), at times could tell what chord especially when the bass helped, but other times it just was indistinct and provided noise vs chord information? Guess I just want more chord less indistinctness? Not sure I'm explaining this right. I enjoy heavy distorted ominous guitar, I just felt it was too much ? It’s a good song with meaningful lyrics. I wonder if your crow knows my raven...

Nice bass stuff in the intro and throughout, I think that’s my attention getter in this one. I like how complex it gets, interesting layers. Nice contrasts. Good stuff.

Nice to hear some reggae around here. I enjoyed the song and the video. I think you nailed it, the mix is good and the groove works well. Poor Mickey...

Fun one, nice to see you performing it on your piano. I don’t know the song, but can almost hear the words and see people dancing to it. You got the vibe for sure.

Hi Jeff, thank you for listening/watching Spooky, I'm glad you enjoyed the song and video. Appreciate the feedback !

Hi Wookiee, thanks for listening/watching and I'm glad you loved the video, it was a lot of fun to make it.

Hi bmarlowe, thank you for listening/watching and your comment. I try to put interesting things in my songs so thanks for the feedback on that and the vocals. Appreciate it !

Very spacey like outer spacey. The lows sound very good. Has a bit of an eerie tone but also peaceful. Interesting combination.

Speaking of the American Revolution, I just heard an interview with documentary maker Ken Burns about an upcoming documentary about the American Revolution and how divided the people were at that time. I think its long, over 10 hours and I think in November it is on tv. And Nigel, great song, important lyrics. I especially enjoy the drums too.

Excellent! I especially enjoyed all the guitar parts. Interesting ending to the song and the story.

Sorry for all the difficulties you and your loved ones have been through. Music gets put on the back burner for a time, but then when we are ready and it is still there. I enjoyed the song very much, and even if you dont want to be mean, you play a mean guitar! Take care

Me thankey

Ha, that female tarantula was a generated image with a messed up cigarette so I had to fix the cigarette position in corel, then add some smoke and I used a program I have from some bundle purchase called Photo Mirage that you can animate things sort of and turn a picture into a video clip. So thats how that one came to be. I used it on a few other still photos to give a little animation. Glad you liked the song and that the video stuck with you even if its awkward to you but fun too. I appreciate your comment, thanks for listening/watching.

Hi Mark, thanks for listening/watching. Glad you had some laughs so did I. Some of the prompts or images I used when I saw the results I laughed, many unplanned. Thanks for the positive feedback. My layering vocals is because my voice is always bothered by smoke, pollen, dust so it became what I do to improve my songs and I do enjoy making them. I couldn't do without Melodyne ! both to clean things up and to line things up but also to test out where a harmony might sound good and for some special effects too.

Hi Bjorn, thank you for listening/watching. Thanks for the positive feedback too. I do think it gets better at what it does so just a matter of time till its very advanced. I kinda like the odd things it does so I will miss that.

Hi Jerry, Ive been a long time sky watcher, so on a trip to Canyonlands park in Utah, I attended an evening sky watch event with a park person leading it and we saw something that was striking and he said he had no idea what it was, and well that was his profession. I agree with your comments!

HI Nigel Thanks for listening/watching and im glad you really liked the track. Ai is such a mixed bag and becoming more involved in everything every day. Its so fast, as I said during the making of the video new free programs would show up online. I have concerns too. My state is in a pilot program where medical decisions will be made using AI. Great. Yes its fun to play with and make images and videos but it goes way beyond that. Its like a pandoras box thats been opened and time will tell where its all going to take us. I hear you.

Hi Chaps, thanks for listening/watching. Glad you enjoyed the music. Interesting i do have desolate guitars free version and think I actually did use it in there but forgot to put it in my list. I really had difficulties choosing the guitar sounds I wanted to use and redid what I used many times, so I think it was one of the ones I kept parts of in the song. Always amazing what great free stuff is available.

Enjoyed it, it has a really nice atomosphere, almost like a live moment. Smooth. Very well done all around.