Douglas Kirby

That was a cool groove and listen overall. Thanks for posting.

I too thought of surf music when the song started. I liked your lead vocal, and it sounds like you have a nice work in progress here - I don't know if it needs anything more actually. Thanks for posting.

Yes, the synths are cool on this song. I think the bass sounds fine, as does the overall mix. Cool ending. Thanks for posting.

I enjoyed the song, and I thought the mix was excellent. Oh, I did hear a bit of the ssss on the BGVs mentioned above. Thanks for posting.

The lead vocal reminded me a bit of Dennis DeYoung - sounds cool. I liked the song - good arrangement. The guitar solo was very nice. No crits on the mix - it sounded fine to me. Thanks for posting.

That was wild - I never know what to expect from you. Very creative. It was a pleasant listen - thanks for posting.

I enjoyed the song - your lead vocal works well with the song. The mix sounds good to me. I didn't hear the clunks - did you remove them? Thanks for posting.

I enjoyed the song - I agree with the bit of melancholy to it mentioned above. I thought the mix was excellent, and I liked the video as well. Tasteful guitar solo and a pleasant lead vocal. Nice job - thanks for posting.

I enjoyed it Wookiee - the music did sort of flow along - going well with your theme. I liked the bells - that was a nice touch. A creative listen - thanks for posting.

Joad - Thank you very much for listening. The Velvet Underground - that's a compliment right there?

SPAK - Thanks for your comments and for listening - I appreciate it.

I was taught a long time ago to sing from the diaphragm of the chest - from deep down. I sit down when I do a vocal, but I lean forward and sing from the diaphragm. Once I learned that, I rarely need to use Melodyne. In fact, instead of using Melodyne, I usually punch in and sing the phrase again.

Grem - Thank you very much for listening to my songs - I appreciate it. kloon - Thanks for giving my song a listen.

Lynn - Thanks a bunch for your comments and for listening. daryl1968 - Hey Daryl - thank you very much for your comments and critiques. Wookiee - Thank you very much for giving my song a listen. Jesse Screed - Thank you very much for your kind comments. Regarding influences, pretty much everything Rock 'n Roll - my parents are both rockers (going back to the late 50's and onwards), and growing up the radio was always on - so I guess I absorbed a lot of it through listening as a kid. thegaltieribrothers - Thank you very much for listening.

I enjoyed the song - especially the lyrics. The mix sounds pretty good to me. Thanks for posting.

Cool funky tune - your lead vocal made me think a bit of Peter Gabriel. Good song - nice job. Thanks for posting.

I enjoyed the song - especially following along with the lyrics. The mix sounded pretty good to my ears.

I liked your smoky lead vocal on this one . Cool tune and the mix to my ears is excellent - especially that bass. The sax sounds real - so if it's not - great job? Thanks for posting.

I thought the music went well with the theme of your song - very positive and upbeat vibe to it. Thanks for posting.

That was a lot of fun watching you play - impressive composition. It sounded excellent to my ears.

emeraldsoul - Thanks for giving my song a listen and I'm glad you liked it. I'll try giving the bass a boost as you suggested - cheers. ABull - Thanks for your kind comments and for listening to my song. Leadfoot - Thanks for listening and for your kind comments - you're not the only one who suggested the 'Dead - interesting. bjornpdx - Thanks for the compliments and for listening.

I enjoyed listening to your guitar playing - well done - excellent performance. What axe did you play on this?

That's a touching piece John - I really liked the melodies all throughout - very nice composition. I thought all the instruments sounded fine to my ears.

A song you wrote at 19 - that's cool - I liked the song and it's catchy. As far as the mix is concerned, I would like to hear more separation for the bass, but it's not that bad as it is.

I liked the fx on your lead vocal - reminded me a bit of Lennon's vocal on "I Am The Walrus". This tune is trippy man - very psychedelic. I thought the drums sounded better on the second version.