I found the Hi hat a little to forward when the vocal started Tim, perhaps a little to much reverb on that vocal too. Some nice playing in there look forward to the remix?
Nice to see you here Lynn, I agree vocals up a tad, less busy drums something a little more driving as suggested by James, a little remix in the offing the furry ears are telling. good start though.
Thank you Rebel, yeah I suppose there is an element of those hazy days of the 70's ?
Thanks Pete appreciate your ears.
Hi Skyline if you look in the control bar of the forum there is a Bandlad Logo after the text formatting this will allow you to embed a Bandlab track I also think just pasting an embedding link from other sites will just do it.
Tricky to get a real feel for something with only a 30 sec burst, personally I think it is better to share complete track on eithe Bandlab or Soundcloud etc, but your choice.
The tiny little bit I did hear sounded OK.