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Another one were the vocal content will not be commented on. Again I am finding the bottom end a little on the light side for the style. As usually some good playing and musical composition. What sort of compression are you using on your drum kit. I use Boz Digital's, David Bendeth  +10dB suit which I find can give a real punch to drums and bass. It used to come with Pro Channel versions.

@Calum Findlay Nice track gets a little quite here in places, which is a shame barely lighting the first two segments of my meters. (Saffire Pro 40 driving Adam A7x's, just so you know I am not running into some none sense kit)

Some low-fi Jazz grooving , is quite nice.

Nice enough track nothing I could hear to add any meaningful suggestion comment, thanks for sharing.

Nice track Douglas easy on the ears, thanks for sharing.

I enjoyed this in the main David, I agree the shaker is a little present in the opening stage and like Tom I found the Kick had more click than kick. Nice track a few mix tweaks will put some polish on it.

You need to be quick with Bats tracks he showcases them for very short periods.

Not bad sir at least I caught this one in its embryonic stage. ?

@emeraldsoul Well Tom the first 19 seconds do sound like they are through a megaphone? then for me it sounds a bit boxy until the drums kick in at the 1:27 mark, which then returns to a slight boxy sound around the 2:00 mark. There is a lift out of the boxy-ness around the 3:00 mark I think it is the choice of instrumentation. Other than that it is a fun sounding and imaginative track, I do not detect a bias one way or the other on the Adam's. You are also correct in the idea that you will never make her happy.

Not now @Lynn, previously it sounded like you had use a plugin to create extra width so here the guitar sound to the left of the left speaker. it now sits just to the right of the left speaker. If that makes sense.

Also the Beatles and many bands when they only had 2 or 4 tracks. It is your track and your mix for me it just felt like it pushed it outside of the mix which is why I mentioned it.

Welcome to the songs forum Treesha. Interesting piece thanks for sharing.

Thanks @freddy j very much I do not consider my self a singer so to some extent I am not looking for them to be to forward and yes I did want to create an air of dream state. Thank you for your ears and kind words, stay safe out there.

@David Sprouse So you give the remix the thumbs up thanks you.

I think you only need to do this if a song is a throw away song and this song is not a throw away song. A long introduction gives you chance to prepare. Yes Bandcamp is good, really any of the streaming services that do not need something installed are fine Philip, I will not listen to stuff on Spotify as it did require something to be installed, do not know if it still does but.....

Indeed.

Dam dam bu&&er bu&&er dam missed it again.

This is a beautiful song but the mix and arrangement need a few tweaks, Tom's suggestions are good, it would be nice to hear a little more of the Bass line. Could I suggest a change in the drum groove when you hit the chorus, just to bring it more to the listeners attention. That title is a great hook line but you need to deliver it with more intent, possibly even give it a 1 or 2 bar pause before delivery. Finally I am not a country music fan but if you made a few tweaks to this I would consider buying it, thanks for sharing.

The opening phrase needs to be a little louder for me as it was breaking up here, probably the Internet as much as anything. Other than that the mix works on the Adam's. It sounds like you have crafted it well, as Lynn notes the space between is welcome, thanks for sharing. For future reference better to post a direct link rather than to FB or even Spotify.

Mix works OK here though the Guitar is a panned a little extreme. Thanks for sharing.

Not one to comment about the lyrical consent of worship songs. Musically it works, and the mix come across OK here bu the Kick is a little forward on the Adam's.

Got your blues groove on with this one @Douglas Kirby. I enjoyed the whole thing. Only thing I would say on the mix is I think Ozone 9 is over squishing it as the meters on my mixer are pretty much pegged in place for the duration.

@David Sprouse my thanks for your ears and time you are most kind, I enjoyed your latest small track.

@Leadfoot A little metal to start the day never hurts, will not comment on lyrical content. It might surprise you I actually quite like a bit of metal, I was musically educated on the likes of Black Sabbath, Black Widow, early Led Zeppelin, Deep Purple, Taste, T2 etc. (much to the fear of my dear old Strict Baptist Dad) Musically it sounds accomplished. Mix wise, and this is just my personal furry preferences, I would have liked the kick to have been a tad more chest crushing, some more separation between the featured guitars would have been nice, they all sounded very much on top of each other. The vocal was nice and clear, lyrics understandable. Thhe opening synth drone was very nice. Perhaps slightly over squished, the meters on my desk seemed to be locked in place. Overall though breakfast was better for a little metal, thanks for sharing.

I will come back and listen again as I go distracted by something.