Jump to content
daryl1968

The Comeback - new original song

Recommended Posts

Hi fine folk

It's been a while and I apologize for my absence. 

Here's a new song. Nits and crits welcome. 

Lyrics below link

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/oqrjE

The Comeback

V1
After years of silence there's no coming back
Into a world that's used to constant exposure
Your gonna start all over with a catchy track
But the world's not ready for this poseur
Ch
And there's a glimmer of hope with every brand new tune
This is the one that's gonna break on through
V2
There was a moment of brief success a few years back
Something tells me that fame has long passed by 
No one remembers about the ageing hack
With a  songbook full and a dream that's over
Ch 2
You could give up the ghost or write a banging tune
You could write it for them or just for you
There's a glimmer of hope with every brand new tune
This is the one that's gonna break on through

 

 

 

 

  • Like 5

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

It's catchy in a good way mate, not like an STD. 🙂 

  • Haha 2
  • Confused 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
Posted (edited)

Catchy and sweet. I hear a little Alan Parsons in there. Can't hear anything to criticize in the mix. Neat.

Edited by Barry Seymour
  • Like 2

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Nice one Daryl, lovely composition. Enjoyed it - no crits.

Andy

 

 

  • Like 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Having followed your work for s o  o long it's good to hear your back ...but I feel an underlying message in this song so I hope it makes the break and it pays your bills ...well deserved commendation mate ..liked it a lot 

ATB

Steve ( Supareels_Music)

  • Like 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

excellent song, production, mix....the whole thing....has a beautiful feel to it that reminds me of Everything But the Girl's best songs 🎶🎶🎶🎶

  • Like 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Glad you're releasing more new material. The tune is your classic unique style which I enjoy.

The mix sounds great here too, perfect for the style.

  • Like 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Daryl,

Good track and great to hear your music again, you have a very unique sound that is instantly recognizable.   Your lyrics are always clever but  I particularly like the lyrics on this song, I think many can identify with the message:)   Super enjoyable listen.

 

Regards

  • Like 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Really well constructed liked the way the vollums changed nothing was forced rally liked the finger clicking i the verses

 

  • Like 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Hi Daryl,
Great to hear another song from you .
Very nice arrangement of piano and strings and quite a catchy tune.
Hope to hear more from you.
-Bjorn

  • Like 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
On 7/24/2022 at 10:27 AM, KSband said:

Catchy pop song, nicely done.

Thanks so much

On 7/24/2022 at 11:12 AM, Bajan Blue said:

Hi

Definitely a catchy track and well done - nice mix

Cool

Nigel

 

Thanks Nigel. Very kind of you

On 7/24/2022 at 7:51 PM, David Sprouse said:

Daryl, great to see you!   Like your song.  It's catchy.   

Thanks David - good to see you too

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
On 7/24/2022 at 8:54 PM, Bapu said:

It's catchy in a good way mate, not like an STD. 🙂 

Ha. Cheers Baps

On 7/25/2022 at 2:38 AM, Barry Seymour said:

Catchy and sweet. I hear a little Alan Parsons in there. Can't hear anything to criticize in the mix. Neat.

Much appreciated Barry. Thanks

On 7/25/2022 at 5:16 AM, AndyB01 said:

Nice one Daryl, lovely composition. Enjoyed it - no crits.

Andy

 

 

Thanks so much Andy. Hope you are well mate 

  • Like 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
On 7/25/2022 at 8:08 AM, Wookiee said:

@daryl1968 Nice catchy little tune.  Mix works well here.

Thanks Wookster me old mate

On 7/25/2022 at 9:38 AM, mark skinner said:

Beautiful mix. I honestly don't know how this could be improved at all. Nice ..   mark

Thanks so much Mark. That means a lot

On 7/25/2022 at 9:38 AM, STEVE POOLE said:

Having followed your work for s o  o long it's good to hear your back ...but I feel an underlying message in this song so I hope it makes the break and it pays your bills ...well deserved commendation mate ..liked it a lot 

ATB

Steve ( Supareels_Music)

Thanks a ton Steve. You're very kind

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Hey Daryl -- glad to see you back and posting new songs on the forum.  Excellent catchy and memorable song.  Love the finger snaps!!!!  Great vocals and harmonies!!

  • Thanks 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
On 7/31/2022 at 12:25 PM, freddy j said:

glad to see you back and posting new songs

me too, same thing!

On 7/24/2022 at 5:54 PM, Bapu said:

not like an STD

had a moment of my "adult onset tourette's" (hey I'm an American with  disability), but thought better of it 🙃

👏

t

  • Like 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Please sign in to comment

You will be able to leave a comment after signing in



Sign In Now

×
×
  • Create New...