Jesse Screed

10 hours ago, batsbrew said:

I am a jon Anderson.

I always thought you were more of an Anders Johnson, but I only know you from the internet.😁

whooo

wah wah ya ya
 

break nme freez

ok

missing sum middines

and donnaq sumner voczlaz

luv 2 luuv u bb

hpoww many times XXX have you bean around the bolx

helklo wormmy

too hawyt

cool tunes tho

2 hawyt

need to work on that vackol mi9s

Did you place thaguitar or is that a bunch off looouups?

waiting for yourr answer

innovence the is i how it starts

roger that

maybe just a little more c in the 2 2 5

acoustic good, live?

luvin thz more az i go

say it eith ur heart5

always hutz

the drum arrangenment could be djr gt, to blah

you got s nive saturtiom thing ther egoing

that aws great thank you

2 hot

trying to discern the message

cool piano

I will give u timre

the high is 2 e3cxvited

\but it i t has xome basis

n eeds a flesh out but  u not carew

etye

cey

F and F

got dang

a little

who did that hornsssszzzzz

iz u ok?

awwawawawawawwa

elvis li8ves11!!

do't let htem tkea ur cajobalz

this is fuxxicki ng

oxxen

On 1/3/2023 at 10:22 PM, PhonoBrainer said:

Some trains leave the station early?

you might get board and impatient

but that leads to summtin elase

my 3urd lisen

hard to nit this

a woman's touche'

his lonely room

me maybe laee punch on drums

did the Eagles do thid sopng

smile

nothing left to C

and into the dawn they tumble

m huh

maybe more clarity on the acoustic in the first 45

not sew shure about hte vid

but, I know, no ting is straight foerwad anymoww

\zelz

i listen wid out the vid

muy calladido

nice use of delaay

ginve me a more thingy video next tim

i been strowked rnough

yuo live in a world of spirits

IC

U kneed a channel

bread bjorn

breadf

killer aaaawawawawawawwaq

@ 2:33 reminds me of using t racks when it wornt homogenized

sxxssZzzszsxcseqsaxssdwzzxxwwexc

this is awesome

did you know that sdfvgnmri

i like tomie boland two

smokin

pat weethigy

Friends

I don't know what that is.

If to have friends you must be a friend

then i M lost

great mix at 75db

then that thing at 2

clean and clear

i never knew a drummer in HS

this is cool

nice pads

who did the pads.>.

greatr mizs

I would take some of those histrionics and paste them into a shorter version

could make this a 3 kindatng

but htat wutrt they said abour t the WHITE ALBUM ,

eye M so pleezzed to wall into this

what is the guitar

the arp is nice

hide it all away

the children

nice cello   whs is it

me likey

battles that can't be wobn

victory

tomorrow

you and ne

a little long

1:50 very nice maybe get thert sooner

need some bg

i hear some glithches

most wont

I love this

thank you

well thur u go

love the synths

the guitar, who played that?

I think maybe work on the arrangement]

tyou have a great template, but you have not rwecued it too the elemnts

the mix is gettinbg ther

yes

we could always be liek thuis

but

I think I said something before

but I like to hear my buds again

you do great drums

and even better guitar

aa bit toppy on the drums?

the bass could be eq i hear some cray

i love you freddy

I seem to have misplaced my aw'erifj8v,

thats some god chit there

to hot pull it back

need more DNR

I'[m down to 60 and

 you need to get your choir to sing to this

I love it

almost disco

love to luv you

this isn't really you, you are an AI bot

eye no U rrrrrrrr

helloe freddy

how yuu dewin'?

pry bout right

the reverse thing at the beginning is thought provoking

the bass guitar is moving in and out,

for me the real shit happns at 2 forty five

and the end is right therehttps://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Yes_band_members

so where do you want to go?

Ithink you eed to find a jon anderson

Jon Anderson

this is so awesome

reminds me of Kansas

if i were to make a suggestion

the vocals in the at 60 sec are bit forward

at 1:50 it works itself out

this is a very good mix

and arrangement

lead vocals maybe a bit more auto mation

cool organ

working guitar tones

to long for the average listener regardless of the fact that the base finall y steps out front

knock 45 seconds off this

pump the bass on the fade out

and damn

put your shingle out

sdifun ;W UK*AY-bbgu9[-h9 3583459034766

alright then

nice atmospherics

very ethereal

I'm missing just a little low end

(listening at 70-75 db in my room)

the bass drum could be more present, actually, not present, bit a little more 500 for the drums overall

love the guitar work, the chorus is cool

I love this

thank you