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Not my style either but very impressive production and he has a great voice.

What a great song with so many layers. Very nice listen on my phones, everything sits nicely. My only thing is my usual dislike of the compressed clicky drum tones, that's nothing new, not a fan of newer drum kit sounds. Excellent playing as always.

Very good work, nice arrangement. The only thing that I didn't care for was when the kick came in, it sounded too big to me.

Sounds a lot tighter. I like the harmonica addition.

Great playing! Maybe less kick action on the drum part would help. The guitars almost get too busy towards the end. You are way more talented than me so feel free to ignore this advice.

Cool song, good work!

This sounds very Peter Gabriel, very cool. The guitar tones sound really good. I have some very nice homebuilt amps but I've been too lazy to try and record them, the plugins are so easy to use.

It sounds really good, nice job on this one.

Really cool song, good work!

I like the guitars and bass but the drums are not working, really fighting with it and things sound out of sync.

Sounds good, nice little arrangement.

Nice instrumental. The bass sounds pretty weak on my headphones.

Epic!! The recording sounds really good. The Cello is a nice addition.  Great job.

If it were me I would back off slightly on the kick. But it may be where you like it so it doesn't matter. The guitars sound really nice, great arrangement.

Good rocking tune i like it! A departure from your more jazzy stuff.

It sounds good but to me the lead guitar is a bit to loud in the mix.

Listened on my studio monitors and headphones and didn't hear it at all, strange.  It sounds really good. I think this my favorite of you songs.

listening on my kitchen computer speakers I'm getting a weird high pitched sound with the vocals, almost like a feedback. I'll have to see if I can hear it on my headphones.

Thanks Jeff!

There's lot's of kits out there that you should be able to plug in to your drum software.  Building drum tracks is not my strength for sure.  I've been using Jamstix which uses an AI to play your parts. Its super easy to make basic track but not easy to make a complicated one like yours.  I like the Natural rock kit sounds it has. I've been thinking of trying a different program,  addictive drums or easy drummer for more control over the parts.  My brother used to play drums for me but I can't get him to do it anymore. 

49 minutes ago, mark skinner said:

 Hey , I know I said I wouldn't bump this back up , but I got an e-mail from Mike Enjo this morning and wants to use the song on this Thursdays  Creative Sauce  "Featured Artist" .  The top link now reflects the original mix without the flute.  I'm happy ..   mark

Hey, that's really cool!

Nice song Barry, great chord changes and melody. 

Trippy man. Can't comment on the mix , I'm listening on crummy phone ear buds. 

I just listened again and am even more impressed with your song. It must have been a lot of work with all those changes.  It may be more the sound of the kit, I think I like an old school natural sound.  Not a fan of clicky kick drums and percussive compressed snare. This a very popular sound now. That is totally a personal preference thing, don't pay any attention to me you did a great job.

After listening to this some more I feel like the mix needs some work. Too much reverb maybe? Too much bass?  Any suggestions?