Duuuude! Full Joe Walsh mode! Waay fun. Sorry to have you gone so long, glad you are back.
I'm still getting used to the Bandlab ecosystem. First up, your song came right out of the gate LOUD cause the Bandlab player was maxxed from the get go. And I suspect your tune had plenty of volume.
I really like your vocals, and of course, the lyrics. Fly that flag, bro.
I don't know about you, but did you hear the less-than-seamless edits, for example 2:32 - seems like you cut and pasted in a song section and maybe missed the rhythm a little - or was that courtesy of the Bandlab upload process? Hard to tell. I'm sure you'll get on top of it.
I would also vote for a vocals-up mix, and I think you have room to decrease volume on that piano. Said a piano player
More Lynn songs are always a good thing to my ears.
cheers,
-Tom