Paul Bush

Hi Larry , you are such a clever fella, I like all of your stuff ...... its just so good , I wrote a song with just piano , drums , bass, orchestra   and a vocal , as I´m in no way a pianist it was  O.K  but didnt fullfill its potential  , the strings were  just the same chords as the piano and didnt weave in and out of the melody as they should .so listening to you  gives lots of ideas on how I can improve .cheers paul DB

Yes , loved this one,  right up my street,  it had a  joe jackson , squeeze  sort od feel to it .production was gtreat 

Its aleady been said above , and I concure . but i still have to say I loved the whole thing , production was superb 

Nice one guys , just cant beat a couple of stops to give a song that extra kick works perfectly . cheers paul DB

Thanks Tom , I  tried  adding a second  vocal and then mixed in a vocorder (3rd) type thing ..it souned like donald duck on helium  ..I´m just getting to grips with all the features on bandlad  ( learning by doing ) so I hope the next song wll be an improvement upuntill now Ive struggled with the technical side of things  so i´m now taking my time  , my problem is,  after writting and recording a song I tend to rush the mixdown stage 

Yep Batsbrew ,another super song and really good use of the wah wah , not as easy as one thinks

Hey guy`s I`m really pleased to hear that you liked the tone of my  ``homemade Tele´´ , I´m still stugling a bit with the string height but the neck is just super  I used a wood stain and then a 5 -6 coats of clear silk finnish laquer , just soo smooth .. and noo it belongs to eddie .... Ed........ cheers paul DB

Hi yep ,I loved the intro guitar riff it just set up the whole tone for the song,  and the vocals (Ray Davies)were also good  just the whole  feel from the song ..nice one

Oh yes!  a brave choice to cover any beatles song , and you pulled it off briliantly , the vocal was more than spot on, really well done  , and you did make it your own ..super

Yep I like this one,  great vocals , and the harmonies really hit the spot , with the melody weaving through the whole song  , inspiring..

Thanks Nigel , I think I did the riff with the tele  solo on my mexican strat...... Now Mink DeVille I remeber them from way back , they had a hit with..... ..i cant remember the name but we sang long with it a lot , now that`s  going to nag me for ages   ``something swing `´´??? I´ll have to google it up  cheers paul DB

Hi Douglas . yeah I self built a kit telecaster  and installed two tonerider pick -ups and I really love it , I wrote ``eddies t-shirt ´´ with it here´s part one of two.      not bad for  €200 ,00  cheers Paul DB

Thanks Tom ,   I really do  appreciate all the response I get here on this forum last year I posted songs on music groups on FC and absolutely nothing, not even something snotty which I dont mind at all , Ive also posted stuff here in Austria and once again ``nicht`s´´ mind you the competion here is rather hard I just heard that   `` puppet on a string´´ by Sandie shaw just stormed the charts at number  24.... . I dont have a problem to look at myself in the miror and take stock, when  I get in a music block or in a rutt,  its then time to  start jamming with drum tracks with different rythums with my trusted homemade Tele , my mexican Strat , and japanese Ibanez . And do some honest playing  working up a sweat getting down and dirty (sounds rather American that) a super riff will allways rear its ugly head ,  play, jamm and inspire that´s my motto , once again thanks for the encouraging comments Tom regards Paul DB

Yeah maybe late seventies , the production and tone quality isnt too good either , it was one of those quickie songs , I certanly didnt push the musical barriers on this one or on any of my songscome to that , they tend to lean to a  pretty standard structure ...... I´m just soo eager to please ..... i think its time maybe to take a break for a while I´m really starting to repeat myself (musically).... maybe I´m getting  lazy .. I really do appreciate the  critism and feedback, a million times beter indifference and silence                cheers paul DB

Hi this is a guitar riff based song  , of late I´ve been using the keyboard to write and  I find my self repeating myself  due to lack of musicall ability on said keyboard  , so i´m happy to have this one  to present , 

Hi a really well crafted song loved the chorus melody and whole feel ,...nice one  ..nice to hear an voice without added  gimmicks 

On 1/26/2020 at 11:56 PM, mark skinner said:

 This is one I co wrote with a friend , pushed it down the list to redo, lost it in a crash and forgot about it.  I woke myself up this morning singing it. I found a copy of it on an old flash drive , ran it thru ozone and now surrendering it. Pretty sloppy but here it is.  I wanted to wait until my last song was off the page  but I feel compelled to post it now. I guess this cold front has made me feel like going further south.     mark      " Link Removed "   New link posted further down page.

 

The whole thing was really slick ...loved the whole feel .. I could listen to it for ages and allways find something different in there ..nice

Well this is so bloody good  words fail me just everything hits the spot great vocals , love the guitar sound  wel everything really

Well its all been said really ,I have a well untrained ear so I´ll not nitpick as i have`nt a clue, so from my laymans point of view it really hot the spot cheer´s nice one..Paul DB

The vocals were more than great, so well sung  and recorded  I wish i could do somethng so good as that. everythng so clear 

Hi Larry,   way out of my class, loved it, the violin sounded beautiful was the guitar virtual or live ? it was hard to make it out,  really well played .

Thanks Bjorn and Dan for the encouraging comments , On the usual music web sites I hardly ever got any response at all good or bad  ..so since installing bandlab and being a member on this forum things have really changed , once again thanks for taking the time to respond cheers Paul DB

been there many a time

Loved the whole thang , I kept waiting for a chord change that didnt come and I´m so pleased it didnt (just shows how I´m pre-progammed verse chorus verse etc )I loved the southern, modern country, dare I say Doobie  feel , cow bell in the mix and shakers gave it a great groove ...guitars bloody great ....write some more of these please ..top man cheers

On 1/25/2020 at 12:03 PM, martsave martin s said:

song title Mon DIEUX revient

any coments, advices & feedback are welcome

lyrics & music Eric L

arrangements & production Martin S

 

thx

martin

 

 

Great song love the intro snare sound ,  vocal was way upfront super guitare work Ooohh yeah well done