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    Well produced, well mixed. Strong voc track.
    Couple questions: Seemed like breath sounds were emphasized instead of the usual reduction?
    Is that voc vibrato an Auto Tune thing?
    Thanks for posting.
    -Bjorn

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  1. The Open Road

    Just a nice melody to listen to while driving down a lonely  highway in Utah and Arizona.

    NI Sunburst
    NI Strum
    Ilya Efimov guitar
    Trillian
    AD

     

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  2. Nice backing track and chord changes.  
    Vocal needs to be more forward in the mix. I never understand all the lyrics (but could be due to my hearing loss)
    Well done.
    -Bjorn

  3. Actually I liked the long intro.
    There's a drum hit (eg 1:37) that's a little distracting.
    The horns work really well
    Abrupt end.
    As always I like the upbeat feel of your lyrics Freddy.  Nicely done.
    -Bjorn

  4. Thanks everyone for the comments
    Steve - yeah, lots of women bashing back then, supposedly in a humorous way
    Steve @baselines - they had Cocaine Candy back then - I think I was born too late
    freddy - it's always the profits
    Nigel - my wife was a little put off when I ran the video past her.
    Old Joad -  I used OBS studio to capture the videos off YouTube and GreenShot to capture the still images. Then  DaVinci Resolve for the vid.
    John - I still can't believe that Winston ad!

    -Bjorn

  5. Inappropriate Ads

    While browsing I came across some TV and magazine advertisements from the past that would definitely not be okay today. I put a few of them in a short video and added a tune I wrote about 20 years ago for the soundtrack.  Can't believe some of the drug ads!
    -Bjorn

     

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  6. Really good instrumentation going on here John. Love the horns. I always like your lyrics, no exception here.
    The voc has some high notes and then some pretty low notes. Maybe keep the pitches within the same range. Just a suggestion.
    -Bjorn

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  7. Simple but quite a catchy melody. Could you post the lyrics please?  I only picked up a few words which is probably due to my hearing loss. Thanks
    -Bjorn

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  8. That's AI? The last time I checked on vocal AI it was terrible.  But this sounds pretty decent.  So you can download Synthesizer V and use it on your own computer?
    -Bjorn

  9. Thanks every one. I appreciate the comments.
    Wookie -  I'd love to hear what you come up with in an Eastern tone and scale.
    Johnbee - The vocal were not part of NI India library but from Loopmasters. If you want some really nice female vocal phrases I'd suggest the Vocalise libraries from Heavyocity. Best ones out there IMO.

     

  10. Treesha
    I like the unprocessed sound of your voice (at least that's how it comes across to me). But I think it could do with more treatment, bit more reverb or doubling, something like that. Very nice cadence to the lyrics - fits the music well. I kept hearing a reggae marching band in the background which actually works for me. Nice job. I like it.
    -Bjorn

     

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  11. Thanks for the comments and suggestions. Always appreciated!
    tom - I was wondering if anyone would notice Ravi Shankar's missing finger!
    -Bjorn

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  12. One of those songs that sticks in your head for a while and that's a good thing.

    So, just an opinion from a casual listener here but I think the piano follows the melody a bit too much, like it's competing with the vocal. The voc might stand out better if the piano weren't as prominent.
    -Bjorn

     

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  13. Still sounds very good.  You're lucky to have a video of the performance (great performance btw}. Nowadays it's so easy to record everything,  but back then not so much.
    -Bjorn

  14. John, great lyrics as always, not just the words but how they're constructed too.  And I always enjoy how the accompanying instruments in your songs respond to those lyrics. Wonderful job.
    -Bjorn

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