ABull

Cool vox on this Paul -- perhaps a bit busy arrangement wise and there seems to be a lot of noise like Kevin said -- it also sounds brickwalled. But, given that, it has the sound of much of what you can hear today in indie music (actually going forward from the 80s) so there's that~~wishing you good traction with it~~Allan.

The mix is pristine (see Kevin's comment) -- that synth violin can really sound poignant and you did good work arranging this to bring out that aspect.~~Allan.

Hey, the mix is good and clear as a bell. I like your voice -- it has an appealing hint of English 80s new wave -- nicely done~~Allan.

A commODE TO BANALITY Dis here's such a glad azz bump not like that certain sad azz chump who thrills his mates with bad bazz thumps on songs that smell like his azz dumps.

Hey thanks Paul.

Ahoy!

Thanks Douglas -- I appreciate your listening and commenting~~Allan.

SOM

Hey Steve, you've got a very good song buried in an opaque mix -- please consider redoing this with a stronger guitar based sound -- your vox are very good -- and there are some interesting melodies but the mix and instrumentation detracts from the song. Man, I'd like to hear a new version of this~~Allan.

Hey Treesha, that's some do-wacka-do synth doodlin' there (which after all seems to be the craze) -- since you say you were "playing around" we'll go with that -- good mix on this one as is~~Allan.

Hey Kevin, terrific demo of your song -- vocals are very nice and the arrangement is interesting -- good mix too -- I enjoyed listening to this~~Allan.

AC

Terrific demo of your song Barry -- your voice is perfect for this style -- like that guitar part too. (Just a comment on the lyrics -- the first verse where you're on the floor and she's on the bed sounds like the dramatic climax of the song -- there's nowhere to go after that in that the other verses are setups to that scenerio -- if that was the last verse lyric it would have more impact.)~~Allan.

Hey, Paul, I enjoyed this a lot (love the style and the like) ~~Allan.

Hey Kevin, "Shot in the Back" is terrific --- that groove is infectious and the opening guitar is perfect. Your vox are outstanding -- I like the rock grit in your voice -- the mix is great -- stellar work mate~~Allan.

Freddy, you are a professor of existential blues philosophy for sure -- this mix on this is very good; clear and everything sits well -- another track from you that's a pleasure to hear~~Allan.

Hey Paul, this reminds me of something Steve Miller might do -- good groove and I liked that guitar break -- the playing and tone are perfecto -- good work mate~~Allan.

Hey Douglas, another good track from you -- I enjoyed this -- Allan.

I'm glad you like the tune Freddy -- thanks for commenting.~~Allan.

oh yeah...a sad bump...

was written (music & lyrics) & performed (vocals, electric & acoustic guitars, bass guitar, keyboards, etc.) by me – home studio -- no autotune, melodyne and the like.. ©

Well, t you drew no lines but you did reference the song demo... I'm glad you like it -- thanks for listening and commenting -- much appreciated~~Allan.

Hey, I'm glad you like my demo dude~~Allan.

Thanks Nigel - I'm glad you liked that song demo (other than those box drums )~~Allan.

Hey Freddy, glad you like my tragi-comedy song and esp. the vox~~Allan.