garybrun

Could not open the Spotify track.
The song for me is really not my genre but I gave it a listen
It needs more meat on the bone... and is a little repetitive.

All the best with your music.

Gary

On 7/8/2019 at 8:53 PM, Sailor55 said:

Bass now fixed, or hopefully, better anyway.  Thanks for the input. Much appreciated. - Dan

I can hear you have fixed the bass... very nice track.

Sorry I missed this one.
Very nice playing.
Also love the bass.
Good quality on the recording... never thought a Behringer could sound that good to be honest
They have had a bad rap over the years.

Nice mix.
I like the quality on the vocal...  
Did you glitch the vocal near the end?

Somehow you have a Willie Nelson feel to your vocal.
nice track.

Looking forward to listening to the finished project.

Very nice track and vocal.
Clear mix.

I would like to hear a little more energy and variation in the drum track.
God is watching you  😉

Lovely track.
I,m always in awe of people who have control over their instruments.
Fantastic tone on the guitar.

Thanks for all the comments on the song.
Here is the video and re-mastered.

Thanks for all the tips.
Track is now remastered and updated here and have just finished creating the video for it.
Thanks once again for taking time to listen.

well done.
I remember the original cartoon series very well and the song we reworded as kids (40+ years ago)

Spider man, Spider man,
Lost his knickers in the Isle of Man.
Can he swim can he heck,
Tried again and broke his neck.
there goes... there goes spider man!  🙂

Very nice.
Great groove- great separation.
A lot of frequencies in there !  🙂

Thanks for the comments guys.
Im working on it 🙂

Nice playing with good tone and phrasing.

I use Gullfoss and it does make a difference.
It takes some getting your head around though and there is a good video on its use...  cant remember the address.

Thanks everyone for you comments.
Really appreciated.

I have changed volumes a little.
Need to program the tracks a little more as suggested.

I have been working away and sorry I missed this post Ken.
I dont have the words to express how I feel for you at this time.
Sometimes "deepest condolences" never seem to be enough in situations like this.

But as you can see we are all rooting for you and do care.
Take care my friend.

The last few days I have been working on one of Grems original songs as I was invited too collaborate on this amazing song.
In all honestly it is one of the most beautiful I have heard in a long time and was honoured.
Im sure Grem will chime in on the back story of the song - terminal illness  😞

This is a mix down and I would value your opinions on the vocal and mix and is a work in progress and asked Grem if if I could ask you all for opinions.
Thanks In advance as always.
 

🙂

Thanks Pal... Ill work on it!

Another Garth Brooks Tune.
Does it sound better without the reverb?
I usually use a lot of reverb and experimenting cutting right down.

A Kenny Rodgers Song

I redone the main vocal today and backed off on the reverb as suggested.

Its very hard for me working on my own vocals as I don't hear when it drops tone when Im working on the project
Also singing with feeling to me seems to knock me out of tune... or is it just me??

Changed the reverb and vocal level as suggested,

This was a one take wonder...  I'm just talking to the band members when I'm talking.

Hi JB.
Finally got around to listening to this track.
Its a very heart felt track...

They sound recorders to me that we used to use at school.  🙂
I think it would sound a completely different track if I could let you had some of my piano samples.
Did you record midi on the piano?
If so... send me your piano midi track and I will send you back the track.

I am always amazed at your vision with chord changes.

Good job.