Nio Sebez

On 6/27/2021 at 4:37 PM, Wookiee said:

Welcome to the songs forum.

Obviously cannot understand the lyrics, but they seem to be double tracked which adds to the confusion.  The Organ could do with some EQ taming on those higher frequencies that are resonating.  As Nigel suggest perhaps revisit the mix.

Thank you for your advice and for having listened to it.
It's a pleasure to meet you all 🙂

On 6/26/2021 at 4:57 PM, Bajan Blue said:

Nice track, good effort.

Personally, I would look at the mix a little, the organ does get a little loud sometimes

Nigel

 

Thank you, you may be right, I will try to touch up the organ a little to see how it is  

On 6/26/2021 at 4:43 PM, jack c. said:

wonderful job.jack c.

Thank you

On 6/4/2021 at 11:31 PM, Esther Brulard said:

Hello! I'm new here but I've used Cakewalk for a while,even  when it calls Sonar. This is my latest song :

Hello. I like a lot. Congratulations, very good job.  I hope you send us more songs 🙂 

P.S. I also just arrived at the forum, I am Nio from Seville, Spain.

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See you soon

Sorry if I made some error, I dont know how work this forum very well

Greetings from Seville, Spain.
I present you one of my last songs that I have done.
Produced entirely with Cakewalk by Bandlab.

I've composed lyrics, music, inserted VSTi instruments, and
I have recorded lead vocals and backing vocals myself.
The guitar solo is also real, as well as another guitar in the background in the chorus.
I hope you like it, it is called Fear, Anger and it is inspired by the unfortunate moment we have gone through since the pandemic began.

In a few weeks I will introduce you to the song I am working on now entitled "Rumbling the heart", but that is still a couple of weeks away.

See you soon!

P.S. I have translated this with google, I hope it is well understood. 😉

(The short lyrics)

MIEDO, IRA

Vamos Caminando
Tenemos una dirección
Ya casi llegando
Cambiando el miedo por razón

Vamos despertando
La luz mejora la visión
Ya casi llegando
Aún queda conseguir la unión

ESTRIBILLO
Basta ya de tanto miedo,
impulsado desde arriba.
No permitas que te afecte que,
te cree miedo, ira.
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Escucha tu cuerpo,
sigue la intuición
Y así tu alma
te guiará mejor.

Sevilla, Mayo 2021
Tiempos Heroicos
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FEAR, ANGER

Let's walk
We have an address
Almost arriving
Changing fear for reason

We are waking up
Light improves vision
Almost arriving
There is still to get the union

CHORUS
Enough of so much fear,
driven from above.
Don't let it affect you
cause you fear, anger.

Listen to your body,
follow the intuition
And so your soul
will guide you better.

Seville, May 2021
Heroic Times