Hi Michael sometimes presenting a lot of tracks to be reviewed in one go can put peeps off, your choice but I would suggest offering one at a time.
I listen to the first and the last tracks on Soundcloud.
With the vocals, it should be noted I am not a vocalist as Wookiee singing is extremely dangerous to none Wookiee life forms, not so much for me up as more a little vocal riding to match the supporting music. The drums do sound a little mechanical this can be sorted by moving some of the beats a few ticks backward or forwards of the beat. Perhaps invest in either a quality drum sampler like BFD or SD 3 or look at MIDI drum libraries.
WIll keep the furry ear out for more of your stuff thanks for sharing.