daryl1968 Posted March 3 Share Posted March 3 Hi fine forum folk Sorry I haven't been around for a while - here's a new original song I just finished. Just a fun pop song. Hope you like it Lyrics below the link Crazy Fool Written and performed by Staypress V1 In a world that's straight and typical You dance to a beat that's so mythical They say you're on the wayward track But you just smile and never look back Prechorus They whisper, they talk but you walk the walk Chorus You crazy fool You put the fun in dysfunctional You're really cool With your common sense malfunction V2 With every step you break the rule Maverick heart, nobodys tool Life's a breeze, you've got the knack Of turning skies blue from black Prech Chorus Middle bit They say you're off the rails, a little bit insane You colour outside the lines, a fascinating brain Chorus to end 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Joad Posted March 3 Share Posted March 3 (edited) Nice, great backbeat, and I like the way you use space between the beats, very cool ending I'm going to steal that from you🍻 Edited March 3 by Old Joad 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted March 3 Author Share Posted March 3 2 minutes ago, Old Joad said: Nice, great backbeat, and I like the way you use space between the beats, very cool ending I'm going to steal that from you🍻 Thanks so much OJ. Hope you are well mate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted March 4 Share Posted March 4 Oh man, this is really put together well! Dig the bass, the rhythm guitar and great mix. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted March 4 Share Posted March 4 Clever. Kinda funky and fun. Unserious and put together well. Sounds great. I do like it! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timboalogo Posted March 4 Share Posted March 4 Nice to hear from you Daryl! Love "you put the fun in dysfunctional", great lyric! Excellent mix, kick and bass done well, snare's got some oomph, funky rhythm guitar could come up a bit. Thanks for sharing, Timbo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted March 5 Author Share Posted March 5 On 3/4/2025 at 3:04 AM, KSband said: Oh man, this is really put together well! Dig the bass, the rhythm guitar and great mix. Thanks so much KS On 3/4/2025 at 4:29 AM, treesha said: Clever. Kinda funky and fun. Unserious and put together well. Sounds great. I do like it! Thanks Treesha 16 hours ago, timboalogo said: Nice to hear from you Daryl! Love "you put the fun in dysfunctional", great lyric! Excellent mix, kick and bass done well, snare's got some oomph, funky rhythm guitar could come up a bit. Thanks for sharing, Timbo You too Timbo - thanks mate 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted Thursday at 12:51 AM Share Posted Thursday at 12:51 AM That's the shizz bizz monkey boy. Great mix. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted Thursday at 05:43 AM Share Posted Thursday at 05:43 AM Great mix and I love the lyrics Daryl. We need more fun pop songs. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted Thursday at 12:44 PM Share Posted Thursday at 12:44 PM Hi Daryl Cool track, love the groove and the mix is excellent Loved it Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted Friday at 08:10 AM Share Posted Friday at 08:10 AM I liked this......the guitar riff and rythum worked well loved the piano in the chorus nice one cheers P 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hsmusic Posted Friday at 05:53 PM Share Posted Friday at 05:53 PM Great track, mix & subject matter, enjoyed it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steve@baselines.com Posted Friday at 09:14 PM Share Posted Friday at 09:14 PM On 3/3/2025 at 1:50 PM, daryl1968 said: Hi fine forum folk Sorry I haven't been around for a while - here's a new original song I just finished. Just a fun pop song. Hope you like it Lyrics below the link Crazy Fool Written and performed by Staypress V1 On 3/3/2025 at 1:50 PM, daryl1968 said: ne You colour outside the lines, a fascinating brain Really cool - remind me a little of 10cc. Love the drum sound. What do you use for that? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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