Crazy Fool

[daryl1968]

Hi fine forum folk

Sorry I haven't been around for a while - here's a new original song I just finished. Just a fun pop song. Hope you like it

Lyrics below the link 

Crazy Fool
Written and performed by Staypress
V1
In a world that's straight and typical
You dance to a beat that's so mythical
They say you're on the wayward track
But you just smile and never look back
Prechorus
They whisper, they talk but you walk the walk
Chorus
You crazy fool
You put the fun in dysfunctional
You're really cool
With your common sense malfunction
V2
With every step you break the rule
Maverick heart, nobodys tool
Life's a breeze, you've got the knack
Of turning skies blue from black
Prech
Chorus
Middle bit
They say you're off the rails, a little bit insane
You colour outside the lines, a fascinating brain
Chorus to end

[Old Joad]

Nice, great backbeat, and I like the way you use space between the beats, very cool ending I'm going to steal that from you🍻

Edited yesterday at 07:59 PM by Old Joad

[daryl1968]

2 minutes ago, Old Joad said:

Nice, great backbeat, and I like the way you use space between the beats, very cool ending I'm going to steal that from you🍻

Thanks so much OJ. Hope you are well mate 

[KSband]

Oh man, this is really put together well! Dig the bass, the rhythm guitar and great mix.

[treesha]

Clever. Kinda funky and fun. Unserious and put together well. Sounds great. I do like it! 

[timboalogo]

Nice to hear from you Daryl!

Love "you put the fun in dysfunctional", great lyric!

Excellent mix, kick and bass done well, snare's got some oomph, funky rhythm guitar could come up a bit.

Thanks for sharing,

Timbo