Bapu Posted February 28 Share Posted February 28 (edited) Vocal - Tasos Lazaria Drums - Hugo Riberio Keys - Dave Townsend Guitars - Qoqol Bass, lyrics, arrangement, producer, mixer - Edward Kocol The Enemy Within (s Us Copyright (c) 2025 Edward Kocol [Verse 1a] Lookin' right in at me It's the enemy within We are born with a flame And it's him we could've been [Verse 1b] So give the ghost to yourself And to hell with all the sin Oh we could just be someone else 'Cause the enemy within [Chorus] Is us, been there since the beginning Our love, knowing we never win, it's The enemy within is us [Verse 2] You could never ascend From a place you've never been Come on let me be your friend 'Cause the enemy within [Repeat Chorus] [Bridge] Why oh why cant we see The enemy is not you or me Lets all be sisters and brothers And not look upon us as others [Repeat Chorus] [Verse 3] We can make it all end Speaking plain as friend to friend Brining back all we had then 'Cause the enemy within [Repeat Chorus] [Verse 4 - same as Verse 1b] So give the ghost to yourself And to hell with all the sin Oh we could just be someone else 'Cause the enemy within [Repeat Chorus] [Repeat Chorus Edited February 28 by Bapu 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Joad Posted March 1 Share Posted March 1 Very cool 🤘 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted March 2 Share Posted March 2 wow, Heavy on a Sunday Morning!! Good track, playing and mixing is excellent, track Jumps right out at you! Cool stuff Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted March 3 Author Share Posted March 3 On 3/1/2025 at 8:41 AM, Old Joad said: Very cool 🤘 Thank you (to the other) OJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted March 3 Author Share Posted March 3 On 3/1/2025 at 9:51 PM, Bajan Blue said: wow, Heavy on a Sunday Morning!! Good track, playing and mixing is excellent, track Jumps right out at you! Cool stuff Nigel Thanks Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted March 3 Author Share Posted March 3 On 3/1/2025 at 9:51 PM, Bajan Blue said: wow, Heavy on a Sunday Morning!! Good track, playing and mixing is excellent, track Jumps right out at you! Cool stuff Nigel By the way, it's my son on guitar. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted March 4 Share Posted March 4 Nice heavy tune! Great guitar work and those vocals are powerful. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted March 4 Share Posted March 4 Sounds great ! It really made me smile it’s so good. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted March 5 Share Posted March 5 Lovely stuff Apeman 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steve@baselines.com Posted Friday at 09:27 PM Share Posted Friday at 09:27 PM Nice vocal! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted Saturday at 10:59 PM Author Share Posted Saturday at 10:59 PM Every once in a while, I like to get a "pro" opinion on my mixes of original songs I've produced (and played on). This past Friday on the publicly open Produce Like A Pro Feedback Friday livestream on youtube, Warren Huart gave a review. https://www.youtube.com/live/KMjmruSLo0I His review starts at 12:03. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick Blanc Posted Sunday at 12:11 PM Share Posted Sunday at 12:11 PM Very cool song! Takes me back. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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