freddy j Posted January 20 Share Posted January 20 It has been a while since I have participated on the forum. Small matters have interfered with my participation. Small matters such as illness and two hurricanes which cut a path through the Tampa Bay area within a few weeks of each other. Now that that is over with -- I am submitting a song. It is a silly little love song that has bits and pieces of Blues, soul and pop embedded in it. So, I am not sure in which genre it should be placed. As always, I would be grateful for any comments, Crit.'s, suggestions, etc. that might help me improve it and carry over to any future songs. Thanks. THAT THING THAT YOU DO https://www.soundclick.com/freddyj/?content=songs 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keith Wilby Posted January 20 Share Posted January 20 6 hours ago, freddy j said: Small matters such as illness and two hurricanes which cut a path through the Tampa Bay Jeez, hope you're OK. 6 hours ago, freddy j said: It is a silly little love song that has bits and pieces of Blues, soul and pop embedded in it. To my ears, it's Motown meets the Travelling Wilburys. Very enjoyable. 7 hours ago, freddy j said: I would be grateful for any comments, Crit.'s, suggestions, etc. A few timing issues here and there but then it kinda adds to the charm. Good lyrics. After decades of listening to Peter Gabriel it's refreshing to hear frivolous lyrics 👍 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted January 20 Share Posted January 20 (edited) Always a fan here Freddy! 👍's 👏 one tiny crit, let that last cymbal hit ring out, it ended a bit abruptly... t Edited January 20 by DeeringAmps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted January 21 Share Posted January 21 On 1/19/2025 at 6:58 PM, freddy j said: . Small matters have interfered with my participation. Small matters such as illness and two hurricanes which cut a path through the Tampa Bay area within a few weeks of each other. Jeepers! Classic Freedy J. I like the horns! The story is great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted January 21 Share Posted January 21 man ya really got those blues!well done.jack c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted January 22 Share Posted January 22 Good blues tune! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted January 22 Share Posted January 22 I have no idea what a hurricane is like, never mind two of them. Glad you survived! I like the classic blues thing that you do. They fit in with your stories well. Always a pleasure to hear your songs Freddy. -Bjorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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