Keith Wilby Posted January 3 Share Posted January 3 Written in the 1980s when I was in my 20s. I'd always wanted to write the opposite of a love song and this is what I came up with. The vocal is from the 80s, everything else is new. Comments appreciated. It's a bit long ... sorry 😳 https://www.bandlab.com/post/270564f2-dac9-ef11-88cd-6045bd345b20 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted January 3 Share Posted January 3 Another good rocker! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted January 4 Share Posted January 4 Hi Keith I like this - good track - mix sounds pretty good as well Cool Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timboalogo Posted January 10 Share Posted January 10 I like the song, Keith. Lyrically, it has the feel of "This One Goes Out To the One I Love", but is very much different. Great singing, can you tell us what you did to reprocess a 40 year old vocal? Did you have to do any pitch correction or do you sing pretty well in tune, like it sounds? The drums sound great, as does the lead guitar. Maybe the snare could cut through a touch more. IMO the mix is a bit dry in the reverb department and the bass needs to be moved back, while the rhythm guitar can come forward. As for the lyrics, well done. I liked "I'll build a wall around your brain"! Thanks for sharing, Timbo 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keith Wilby Posted January 13 Author Share Posted January 13 On 1/10/2025 at 8:44 PM, timboalogo said: Great singing, can you tell us what you did to reprocess a 40 year old vocal? Did you have to do any pitch correction or do you sing pretty well in tune, like it sounds? Nothing in the way of pitch correction, I could properly sing back then 🤣 On 1/10/2025 at 8:44 PM, timboalogo said: The drums sound great, as does the lead guitar. Maybe the snare could cut through a touch more. IMO the mix is a bit dry in the reverb department and the bass needs to be moved back, while the rhythm guitar can come forward. Duly noted, will revisit, thanks @timboalogo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted January 14 Share Posted January 14 Rocking all right! I get some Phil Collins vibes, except for the two voiced guitar. Very well performed. I'd like the vocalist closer to the mike. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted January 14 Share Posted January 14 Nicely done. I like it. Wondering if you extracted the vocal using stem separation technology? Anyway, the vocal sounds really good even after 40 years. Maybe bring it up just a bit though. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keith Wilby Posted Wednesday at 02:54 PM Author Share Posted Wednesday at 02:54 PM On 1/14/2025 at 2:45 PM, equality said: I'd like the vocalist closer to the mike. I'll certainly give that a go 👍 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keith Wilby Posted Wednesday at 02:54 PM Author Share Posted Wednesday at 02:54 PM 18 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Wondering if you extracted the vocal using stem separation technology? I did, yes, and it can work very well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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