whoisp Posted November 17 Share Posted November 17 (edited) There's many things I can tell you......... but its a little quick number i was experimenting with Please Follow on YouTube, i return the favour please ask. Edited November 17 by whoisp 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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equality Posted November 21 Share Posted November 21 (edited) Nice harmonies and melodies. Enthusiastic drummer. I like the song but I think the huge arrangement with strings and a lot of reverb is more suitable for a (power) ballad or similar. Your song sounds more like upbeat rock and IMHO craves a different setting, like a rock combo. Edited November 21 by equality 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted November 21 Share Posted November 21 Nice song, I do think the busy drums are distracting from it, otherwise sounds good! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whoisp Posted November 21 Author Share Posted November 21 11 hours ago, equality said: Nice harmonies and melodies. Enthusiastic drummer. I like the song but I think the huge arrangement with strings and a lot of reverb is more suitable for a (power) ballad or similar. Your song sounds more like upbeat rock and IMHO craves a different setting, like a rock combo. Drums intended, its been a year of learning to write drum scores 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whoisp Posted November 22 Author Share Posted November 22 On 11/21/2024 at 3:17 AM, KSband said: Nice song, I do think the busy drums are distracting from it, otherwise sounds good! Drums are best part for me lol 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ray T Posted November 22 Share Posted November 22 Its a good song, well organised. I like the vocal and guitar, thanks for sharing it was a good listen. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted November 23 Share Posted November 23 Hi I like this, and I agree with Ray Cool Stuff Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whoisp Posted November 24 Author Share Posted November 24 On 11/22/2024 at 8:15 PM, Ray T said: Its a good song, well organised. I like the vocal and guitar, thanks for sharing it was a good listen. Cheers Ray Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted November 25 Share Posted November 25 nice.i feel drums are to busy.jack c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paulo Posted December 1 Share Posted December 1 It's good, but it does sound a bit like it was written by the drummer and nobody wanted to tell him....... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whoisp Posted December 1 Author Share Posted December 1 1 hour ago, paulo said: It's good, but it does sound a bit like it was written by the drummer and nobody wanted to tell him....... Musicians vs non Musicians is always hilarious , only Musicians have noticed the drums. non Musicians say they like the drummers energy lol 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted December 1 Share Posted December 1 love that piano.david bowie.toooooooooooooooooo many snare rolls.jack c 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whoisp Posted December 2 Author Share Posted December 2 23 hours ago, jack c. said: love that piano.david bowie.toooooooooooooooooo many snare rolls.jack c Cheers Jack, funny you say bowie, the other day i only the other day, i found out he helped write under pressure with Queen, makes sense, so clever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted December 3 Share Posted December 3 Good song, however the machine-gun drum rolls are a distraction, sometime less is more, drums to busy in the verses, bring back in the verses, push them forward in the chorus. (I used to be a drummer) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whoisp Posted December 3 Author Share Posted December 3 4 minutes ago, Wookiee said: Good song, however the machine-gun drum rolls are a distraction, sometime less is more, drums to busy in the verses, bring back in the verses, push them forward in the chorus. (I used to be a drummer) yes its a choice in this song, purely for project objective with a student 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted December 3 Share Posted December 3 4 minutes ago, whoisp said: yes its a choice in this song, purely for project objective with a student Understood why, just letting you know it didn't work for me, but it ain't my tune or mix, consequently my opinion really is irrelevant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whoisp Posted Sunday at 02:33 PM Author Share Posted Sunday at 02:33 PM On 12/3/2024 at 1:41 PM, Wookiee said: Understood why, just letting you know it didn't work for me, but it ain't my tune or mix, consequently my opinion really is irrelevant. Yes, it was a demonstration of the core drum notation and mapping. Some people say, compared to other instruments, drums can be hard to learn and write for various reason so they stick to basic beats, but never progress much. The curve is very large if you played drums, few things you absolutely NEED learn when playing and or writing drums. I am not a very good drummer but know the theory well from playing all instruments. So you will hear, 4, 8, 16 and 32 on this with basic builds to added rides, spaces and time out with no drums to keep time, its was good for technique and timing . I did spend much tome on the song but more on the drums. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted Sunday at 03:07 PM Share Posted Sunday at 03:07 PM @whoisp it is the machine gun nature of the rolls that got me no drummer can play that precise, even military drummers. Listen to military drummers they play mainly double stroke rolls, but even they exhibit some differences in timing and stroke strength (velocity). Single stroke rolls are a little different but again exhibit differences in timing and strength (velocity) of their strikes. Drummers all have a power hand, one that is always just a little louder. But as I said its your choice, I was merely making an observation that put me off of an otherwise well composed and captured song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whoisp Posted Sunday at 09:49 PM Author Share Posted Sunday at 09:49 PM 6 hours ago, Wookiee said: @whoisp it is the machine gun nature of the rolls that got me no drummer can play that precise, even military drummers. Listen to military drummers they play mainly double stroke rolls, but even they exhibit some differences in timing and stroke strength (velocity). Single stroke rolls are a little different but again exhibit differences in timing and strength (velocity) of their strikes. Drummers all have a power hand, one that is always just a little louder. But as I said its your choice, I was merely making an observation that put me off of an otherwise well composed and captured song. Like i said its for learning, i have 2 that are starting to write EDM that have insane drum risers and rolls. You know i am ex military right lol You want to go to the tattoo and watch HM Royal Marines Top Secret Drum Corps . i know what i am teaching them on addictive drums, that's the main thing, Harry the EDM guy is now cooking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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