Great River Shore

[equality]

Folk or perhaps country and western inspired tune. Found a "lap steel" in an old Omnisphere library.

My vocal is admittedly aging and is not under the same control as at younger age.

Since English is not my native tounge, I struggled with the lyrics as well. Well, enough of red flags! 🙂

edit: Rerecorded some of the  vocals and tried some pitch correction. 

 

 

 

Edited September 24, 2024 by equality

[cakeboy]

Good performances on this one. I enjoyed it

[MichaelJohn]

nice folk song, piano and acoustic sound great together

[jack c.]

all around well done.jack c

[Old Joad]

I like this a lot, what are you using to create the steel pedal, that sounds very cool👍🏼

[equality]

On 9/24/2024 at 8:48 PM, cakeboy said:

Good performances on this one. I enjoyed it

I do appreciate. Thank you cakeboy!

[equality]

On 9/25/2024 at 4:50 AM, MichaelJohn said:

nice folk song, piano and acoustic sound great together

Very glad to hear that. Thank you MichaelJohn!

[equality]

On 9/25/2024 at 5:15 PM, jack c. said:

all around well done.jack c

Many thanks Jack!

[Wookiee]

No complaints about your vocal, mix works OK here. Well done.

[equality]

On 9/25/2024 at 6:28 PM, Old Joad said:

I like this a lot, what are you using to create the steel pedal, that sounds very cool👍🏼

Thanks Joad! It's from an old Omnisphere library, according to them it's a lap steel guitar. 

[equality]

53 minutes ago, Wookiee said:

No complaints about your vocal, mix works OK here. Well done.

I am very glad to hear that! But it took some work in Melodyne 🙂. Thanks Wookie!

[equality]

I wasn't happy with some of bass and vocal parts. Made some changes here as well as levels. Hopes for the better. 😏

[Bajan Blue]

Hi

Like this track and that lap / pedal steel Guitar sounds great

Cool stuff

Nigel

 

[equality]

On 10/10/2024 at 4:32 PM, Bajan Blue said:

Hi

Like this track and that lap / pedal steel Guitar sounds great

Cool stuff

Nigel

 

Great reading! Thanks Nigel, appreciated. 

[mark skinner]

 That was Very Real and intimate. Fantastic job on the steele guitar , it was Very imersive , Soothing and not so country sounding. You presented it well ..  it had an emotional feel like a cello does in this type of song. 

 Loved it ..    ms

Edited October 13, 2024 by mark skinner

[equality]

On 10/14/2024 at 12:46 AM, mark skinner said:

 That was Very Real and intimate. Fantastic job on the steele guitar , it was Very imersive , Soothing and not so country sounding. You presented it well ..  it had an emotional feel like a cello does in this type of song. 

 Loved it ..    ms

I am very glad you liked it. Thank you very much. 🙏👍

[paulo]

When I read "country and western inspired tune" I almost didn't listen, but I'm glad that I ignored my general inner distaste for that sort of thing and listened anyway. 

The only thing that really struck me as something I would change was that the vocal is maybe a bit dry? If it was me I'd be adding a smidge of something airy to that, but then again I probably always have too much on mine, so make of that what you will.

[equality]

On 10/20/2024 at 7:12 PM, paulo said:

When I read "country and western inspired tune" I almost didn't listen, but I'm glad that I ignored my general inner distaste for that sort of thing and listened anyway. 

The only thing that really struck me as something I would change was that the vocal is maybe a bit dry? If it was me I'd be adding a smidge of something airy to that, but then again I probably always have too much on mine, so make of that what you will.

Sorry for late reply. Country was maybe a misconception from my part due to the lapsteel. I am glad you listened and commented. I'll check the vocal reverb and level. Thanks!

[DeeringAmps]

Late to the party, I’ll just echo the comments above, especially with regards to the lap steel. Very nice. 
👍‘s 👏

t

[equality]

19 hours ago, DeeringAmps said:

Late to the party, I’ll just echo the comments above, especially with regards to the lap steel. Very nice. 
👍‘s 👏

t

Many thanks t. Appreciated!