equality Posted July 13 Share Posted July 13 (edited) Instrumental synth and guitar based tune with hopefully some techno rythm to it. I would be glad for some feedback. Should it be longer? Is the outro too crowded? (Made a new outro.)I hoped for some peaking in intensity here (before the outro). Edited July 26 by equality updated info after remix 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted July 14 Share Posted July 14 sounds good and make it longer.jack c 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted July 15 Author Share Posted July 15 On 7/14/2024 at 3:18 PM, jack c. said: sounds good and make it longer.jack c Thanks Jack! I added a coda i major. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted July 16 Share Posted July 16 Hi I like this but I do think that break in the middle from about 1.04 to 2.00 is too long. Apart from that enjoyable Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted July 16 Share Posted July 16 Cool tune, very different. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted July 17 Author Share Posted July 17 On 7/16/2024 at 2:43 PM, Bajan Blue said: Hi I like this but I do think that break in the middle from about 1.04 to 2.00 is too long. Apart from that enjoyable Nigel You are probably right. It's a bit disproportionate in relation to the rest. I have no idea which part to cut, though, LoL Thanks for important view. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted July 17 Author Share Posted July 17 On 7/16/2024 at 4:37 PM, KSband said: Cool tune, very different. I really like "different", which I hope it is. Thank you so much! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted July 17 Share Posted July 17 I like the pattern explorations that make me wonder where you're going with them next. Seems about right lengthwise. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted July 18 Share Posted July 18 This piece engaged me right away and held my interest all the way through. I don't know if the middle part is too long or not, but I really like it. Very well done. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PavlovsCat Posted July 18 Share Posted July 18 (edited) How am I the first to give the original post a like???? Come on, friends, it deserves some likes! Thanks so much for sharing. I have no criticism, I merely enjoyed your writing and playing. I liked it so much I went to and listened to a bunch of your other songs and gave them likes. I really enjoy your musical imagination and playing. Really tasteful playing and songwriting. I enjoyed a bunch of your tracks, but this one especially resonated with me -- the song, the playing, the mix. I'll be following you on SoundCloud (under my pseudonym from my playing days, Peter Woods). Edited July 18 by PavlovsCat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alper Karamahmutoglu Posted July 18 Share Posted July 18 Great stuff, everything balanced, personally, no need to make the outro longer than it is now. Very well done! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted July 19 Share Posted July 19 This is wonderful! I wouldn't change a thing, but I don't have your chops. I particularly like that ending. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted July 20 Author Share Posted July 20 On 7/18/2024 at 1:17 AM, bjornpdx said: I like the pattern explorations that make me wonder where you're going with them next. Seems about right lengthwise. -Bjorn Many thanks Björn! Appreciate your listening and comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted July 21 Author Share Posted July 21 On 7/18/2024 at 4:07 AM, Kevin Walsh said: This piece engaged me right away and held my interest all the way through. I don't know if the middle part is too long or not, but I really like it. Very well done. Thank you very much Kevin. I am glad you liked it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted July 21 Author Share Posted July 21 On 7/18/2024 at 5:06 PM, PavlovsCat said: How am I the first to give the original post a like???? Come on, friends, it deserves some likes! Thanks so much for sharing. I have no criticism, I merely enjoyed your writing and playing. I liked it so much I went to and listened to a bunch of your other songs and gave them likes. I really enjoy your musical imagination and playing. Really tasteful playing and songwriting. I enjoyed a bunch of your tracks, but this one especially resonated with me -- the song, the playing, the mix. I'll be following you on SoundCloud (under my pseudonym from my playing days, Peter Woods). Your comments made me very happy. I am very grateful for those and for your kind kudos on Soundcloud! Seems like we share similar musical roots. I'll check your uploads on Soundcloud as well. Cheers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PavlovsCat Posted July 21 Share Posted July 21 10 minutes ago, equality said: Your comments made me very happy. I am very grateful for those and for your kind kudos on Soundcloud! Seems like we share similar musical roots. I'll check your uploads on Soundcloud as well. Cheers! Haha, don't worry about listening to my stuff. I was once a very good drummer (mediocre on piano and organ) who spent 12 years playing semi professionally, but that was ages ago. I had an injury and tendinitis stopped me from playing. A few years ago I started attempting to play again, but I'm not very good anymore due to physical limitations and 20+ years without practice. But you're very talented and I wanted to encourage you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted July 22 Author Share Posted July 22 On 7/18/2024 at 5:19 PM, Alper Karamahmutoglu said: Great stuff, everything balanced, personally, no need to make the outro longer than it is now. Very well done! Thanks for your listening and nice comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted July 22 Author Share Posted July 22 On 7/20/2024 at 1:55 AM, Lynn Wilson said: This is wonderful! I wouldn't change a thing, but I don't have your chops. I particularly like that ending. I am sure you do have more than so! Thanks a million. I am very grateful. ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steve@baselines.com Posted July 22 Share Posted July 22 On 7/13/2024 at 12:16 PM, equality said: Instrumental synth and guitar based tune with hopefully some techno rythm to it. I would be glad for some feedback. Should it be longer? Is the outro too crowded? I hoped for some peaking in intensity here. Nice - somehow increasing the drive would be beneficial. I think it has to do with the bass part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted July 24 Author Share Posted July 24 (edited) On 7/22/2024 at 10:46 PM, steve@baselines.com said: Nice - somehow increasing the drive would be beneficial. I think it has to do with the bass part. Thanks Steve for listening and feedback! My knowledge of bass playing is rudimentary. Edited July 24 by equality Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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