Glenn Stanton Posted June 3 Share Posted June 3 a modern blues number about the mystery of the break up and how our unbreakable pride can keeps things on a collision course for failure. ? BPM 86 Key C Meter 4/4 Lyrics -------------------------------------------------------------------- something silver, shiney, and caressed something close to her heart says i'm batting second best so how'd we end up in this big old mess? i wanna know she got her reasons and i got mine it's a sorryful thing to be hung by pride pride she won't break and i won't cry no, i won't cry i won't cry seven reasons then i wept to rest she's always right in the fight about second best so how'd we end up in this big old mess? i wanna know she got her reasons and i got mine it's a terrible thing to be hung by pride pride she won't break and i won't cry no, i won't cry i won't cry something here that we both can't stand drowning in wine didn't lend a hand we both agreed this ain't nowhere to be and now we're free free something silver, shiney, and caressed something close to her heart says i'm batting second best so how'd we end up in this big old mess? i wanna know she got her reasons and i got mine it's a pitiful thing to be hung by pride pride she won't break and i won't cry no, i won't cry i won't cry i won't cry i won't cry no 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted June 4 Share Posted June 4 Wow. that's really nice. Nice work on the harmonies. Very nice mix and arrangement. I have never heard modern blues, so this is what it sounds like. Very nice arrangement too, the comings and goings of the instruments. The vocals stand out. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted June 4 Share Posted June 4 Great lyrics, very nice arrangement .. what did you use for the violins they have a great sound .. Steve 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted June 4 Share Posted June 4 nice.jack c 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steve@baselines.com Posted June 4 Share Posted June 4 Nice song - good lyrics, great acoustic sound. one thing I hear that I would work on is the harmonies in the 'so how'd we end up...' I think they are just slightly off. It would really sound great if those were fine tuned. If you agree but don't want to spend a lot of time singing them out again I can help. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glenn Stanton Posted June 4 Author Share Posted June 4 3 hours ago, Supa Reels said: Great lyrics, very nice arrangement .. what did you use for the violins they have a great sound .. the strings are a combination of the sforzando SF "Ethan's Cello" (cello - needed more attack than most of my other libraries) and the violins are Sine Player long major chord sustain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glenn Stanton Posted June 4 Author Share Posted June 4 1 hour ago, steve@baselines.com said: Nice song - good lyrics, great acoustic sound. one thing I hear that I would work on is the harmonies in the 'so how'd we end up...' I think they are just slightly off. It would really sound great if those were fine tuned. If you agree but don't want to spend a lot of time singing them out again I can help. yes in listening back - this may be due to the third vocal "invisible" which is very breathy and tense so i may remove it for those parts. thanks for the offer! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glenn Stanton Posted June 4 Author Share Posted June 4 3 hours ago, Jesse Screed said: Wow. that's really nice. Nice work on the harmonies. Very nice mix and arrangement. I have never heard modern blues, so this is what it sounds like. Very nice arrangement too, the comings and goings of the instruments. The vocals stand out. thanks! i was sort of joking when i said modern blues but as i was trying to find a bucket for them on one of the sites i post to, which had "Blues - Modern" and i was like, "hey, this is kind of a blues number"... so there it is... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted June 4 Share Posted June 4 1 hour ago, Glenn Stanton said: the strings are a combination of the sforzando SF "Ethan's Cello" (cello - needed more attack than most of my other libraries) and the violins are Sine Player long major chord sustain. Thankyou Glenn, much appreciated Steve 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted June 4 Share Posted June 4 This is a damn good pop song that I'd listen to again and again. You have a good voice for this style, which I think is the star here. The mix is clear and balanced on my system. Take a bow! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terry Carroll Posted June 7 Share Posted June 7 This would make a top FM play list in the late 70s. Sounds a little like "Death Cab For Cutie ", that's cool thing. I Like this 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted June 8 Share Posted June 8 Great stuff, nice arrangement, liked all the details in there. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted June 8 Share Posted June 8 Glenn Great track and I really like your vocals, they are perfect in this track - great arrangement Cool Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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